The Edge Of Night

Picture, if you will, two orbs of light where dreams and reality embrace. Both lie at the darkest edge of Night, superimposed on ebony space. Sharing shades of a violet hue, they seamlessly brush darkness away. And as more colors come into view, they adorn the Night's starry array. Similarly, they flaunt paradise, dual sanctuaries shining bright. Presenting Eden, not once but twice, offering a choice of left or right. One shows signs of people living there: fellow humans imbued with a soul. Yet, it's hard to see past what both share: and the wrong choice could levy a toll. Both worlds are equally lush and green: yet only one hints at human lives. On the left, a garden can be seen while on the right, only nature thrives. Choose between two mirrors hung on black, decide before you step through that glass. For, unlike Alice, there's no way back from where souls exist; or souls trespass.

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Date: 3/29/2024 12:32:00 PM
How deep and beautifully your words flow as always dear emile, i love what youv done there and your rhymes are as always brilliant. And the ending is brilliant with reference to alice, “ unlike alice theres no way back” clever. The way youv painted imagery in such a descriptive manner is captivating and i always enjoy reading your poems. This is a fave for me! Best wishes for the contest
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Date: 3/29/2024 1:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ink Empress, you know how to bring a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.
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