The Edge of Night

Come meet me when the sun has melted down
the mountains’ peaks like butter from the sky.
Come meet me far away from all the town.
It’s summer; on a blanket we can lie.
And although what is coming is foreknown,
we’ll still anticipate what is to come
when sun relinquishes to moon his throne.
Come lie with me and hear the evening’s hum.
How many are the songs of nature crooned -
those sweetest lullabies that we can hear?
We’ll listen in the gloaming, and attuned
to dusky sights and sounds, I’ll kiss you, Dear,
for soon to be enraptured by the moonlight,
with bliss we’ll linger on the edge of night.

Oct. 31, 2018 for Janis Thompson's Soap Opera Titles Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pathak Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 11:34 PM
Another sonnet randomly chosen, and such a nugget... and I find, a winner, congrats Andrea
Radke Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 10:14 AM
This is a wonderful romantic poem, Andrea. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Best wishes. Deb
Gauthier Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 7:34 PM
Well penned, Andrea. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 11:42 PM
Oh Andrea....lovely, romantic and enchanting... all assembled to create a stunning entry! I really loved this one Andrea. A fave! Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 6:39 PM
Romantically, iambic and beautiful. Sounds like a night I would like to have, soon. Congratulations and thanks for entering my contest.
Groen Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 10:23 AM
Andrea, your great capacity to write, must be inspired by a great capacity to love, which I believe is the definition of a great poet, with regards, Meru
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 7:26 PM
what a sweet thing for you to say. I don't know about great capacity to love but I do not hold grudges and find forgiving is very easy.
Johnson Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 12:38 AM
Those first two lines did flow like butta'. :)And then your usual sweet feminine tone got back on the horse. Lovely romantic poem. xo :)
May Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 7:49 PM
Well done Andrea....Beautiful writing..
Green Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 12:11 PM
Fantastic Andrea, such a beautiful poem and perfect for the contest. Best of luck my friend.
Godwin Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 11:16 AM
I think this read's like an Edna St. Vincent Millay or at the very least, reminds me of her poems. It is beautiful, Andrea. I'm here for a little bit! Got lots of stuff done. Love ... CayCay
Krutsinger Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 7:16 AM
I was reading this and I thought, "this reads like a soap opera," when I got to the end and saw the favorite soap opera of the 60's and 70's, and maybe 80's I said "Oh, that is where she was going." Nicely penned my friend.
Pandit Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 6:56 AM
Excellent poetry Andrea..Best for a podium win.
Watson Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 5:55 AM
The first two lines alone win it for me, Andrea! A wonderful entry!
Johnson Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 12:36 AM
Yeah, I agree with Wendy, Andrea, what the heck happened after them? :):):) Just having a little fun. xo :)
Lawless Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 4:10 AM
beautifully done Andrea. Great opening couplet.
Blown Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 12:53 AM
yessir/nosir...one never can tell : ) .....the validate code is unbelievable
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