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The Edge of a Cloud

I feel there’s but the edge of a cloud stalling my blue sky The remnants of a dark and thunderous shadow on my world The sun is about to blaze, dawning in luster of light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 7/14/2023 1:43:00 PM
May the sunshine break forth and shine on you brightly, with the wonderous ocean breeze lifting you into joy and peace Mike, I love your little happy poem! :) <3
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/14/2023 4:36:00 PM
Thank you so much BJ!!!
Date: 7/11/2023 5:10:00 PM
Few words, but strong meaning verse, my friend. Have a great week, Mike. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/12/2023 3:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Bill! Happy Wednesday!
Date: 7/11/2023 6:47:00 AM
A great Sijo! Well written Mike. :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/11/2023 7:33:00 AM
Thank you Heidi xxoo
Date: 7/11/2023 6:04:00 AM
Let's hope it will not rain....unless you need it.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/11/2023 7:33:00 AM
Indeed Victor, thank you!

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