The Echo Returns Not

Locked in a room with no windows
I became a shadow
Invisible and unheeded
Having as duty, the slow and steady merging 
Of myself with the dirty walls

As time went by,
I stopped feeling myself
And started thinking that I am naught
But part of the furniture
That stands in the room,
Filled with dust particles all over!

Once, I coughed and realised that I have voice
Which means that I can express myself
And this brought me to try to say something everyday
Just to remind myself that I am alive,
A living human, having in me, the sparkles of mystery

As time went by, my voice got louder
And soon I started shouting out to the silence of the room
That I was confined in, hoping and hoping for an answer
From anyone, even from my own echo
But the echo was never returned to me, however much
I kept vociferating!

Locked in our own vision, we try to receive echoes
From those who battle this world, like us
But the echoes will never return
As those from whom we are trying to receive them
Are merely mirrors, who allow us to see ourselves as we are
And mirrors don't echo back
Mirrors only swallow us in their murky ponds
If we dare dip our toes in!

The room allowed me to shelter myself from my reflection
Still, I yearned for an echo from its vacuum
But I was only met with the harshness of emptiness
As even if I refused to see my truth bared
I went through it as every human would!

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Date: 3/16/2025 9:45:00 AM
Dear Anoucheka, your imagery and metaphors are vivid and expressive. A verse of haunting introspection, longing and inevitability. Congratulations for your success in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/15/2025 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations on this one being on the winners' list. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara K
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Date: 3/13/2025 12:44:00 AM
congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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