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The Echo of Your Breath

An echo of your breath, softly sets upon my ear. Lays within my very depths, resonant words I can hear. Softly, sets upon my ear, the lyrics of our souls tune. Resonant, words I can hear, heartbeats join the gentle croon. The lyrics of our souls tune, sings of velvet bonds that bind. Heartbeats join the gentle croon, of a love that transcends time. Sings, of velvet bonds that bind, the essence of what we share. Of a love that transcends time, life has nothing to compare. The essence of what we share, lays within my very depths. Life has nothing to compare, an echo of your breath.

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Date: 10/24/2011 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Everyone Knows" contest Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/22/2011 8:38:00 PM
Congrats Paula on a super fantastic win with elegant poetry truly awesome as always my friend.. thankxx for choosing my work as one of your winners also..much appreciated luv..
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Date: 10/22/2011 2:22:00 PM
congrats on your win.cory
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Date: 10/22/2011 1:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Paula. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 10/22/2011 12:51:00 PM
Well written Paula Congratulations on your win
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Date: 8/21/2011 6:53:00 AM
fantastic love it
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Date: 8/8/2011 6:25:00 PM
Congrats Paula on having two poems making it to first round competition in PS contest luv.. G.L..
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Date: 8/7/2011 11:49:00 AM
Many congratulations Paula on making it to first round of winners in Poetrysoup contest. Winning wishes for the final round. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 8/4/2011 8:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry x2 making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2011 8:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Paula and good luck!
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Date: 8/1/2011 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/3/2010 9:07:00 AM
Great work! Your writing is one of the highlights of my day so far... Love it!!! Wow. You have a gift with words and images. Amazing
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Date: 11/28/2010 1:46:00 PM
Can see the words whispered together, lovely:)
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Date: 11/21/2010 10:47:00 AM
Just checking out one of yours. I think I did mine right. I always second guess myself. This is a lovely example. Andrea
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Date: 11/12/2010 5:46:00 PM
This is beautifully written! I kinda got stuck reading your poetry this evening. Everything I've read was really, really good! You are a great poet!
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Date: 11/9/2010 6:27:00 PM
Great details in your poem. I enjoyed it very much. Keep on writing. Check out my poetry if you get the chance.
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Date: 11/9/2010 4:21:00 PM
Very nice write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 11/9/2010 4:05:00 PM
Excellent poetry my dear Paula.... so enjoyed..always Michael
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