The Echo of a Soul

The Echo of a Soul 
By Andrew Weeden 

In the windswept hills of vibrant green, 
Here I sit at your lonely grave. 
The bright flower that made my heart beam, 
Is the wilted flower I could not save.  

From the beginning I did not know, 
I was oblivious from the start; 
Cancer’s blade cut away your happy glow 
And would thrust to pierce my very heart.  
 
Consumed in the darkness of raging anger, 
Ten years I stand alone in the rain. 
With death no longer a distant stranger; 
My only companion in the storm of pain.  

Now it seems no one remembers, 
But you did not cease to be. 
Your spirit still burns in glowing embers 
And lives inside the fire in me.  

The storm is passing; I finally see its end. 
Happiness smiles again and shakes me to my core.  
I realize every time I lift my pen 
My Grandma speaks once more! 

Reflections of your love 
Weave tapestries in time. 
As a singing mourning dove, 
Your words whisper in my mind. 

So though you had to go, 
You remain in your begotten; 
As an echo of a soul, 
Gone but not forgotten.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/15/2014 1:34:00 AM
Andrew a wonderful tribute congrats on being featured hugs
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Date: 11/14/2014 9:37:00 AM
What a tribute to your grandma. She would be so proud of you. You are so right about every time you lift your pen, your grandma speaks thru you. Keep writing and a 7 from me. Blessings, Darlene
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Date: 11/11/2014 7:24:00 AM
Vibrant homage.New as well , but still striving to understand how it goes! Warm welcome Courtney vanover!
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Date: 10/26/2014 9:00:00 PM
Hey Andrew! I'm new here as well :-) You're one of the first I've come across so far, thankfully, because I really enjoyed this piece, you totally drew me in... I look forward to reading more from you. Peace, Courtney
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Date: 10/26/2014 5:03:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Andrew- I choose your first very well written poem - I like it a lot!! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/25/2014 7:46:00 PM
I applaud this excellent piece and extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup! I wish you happy writings, my friend! Pandita
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