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The East Coast

We two, hot, muggy.
Lay beneath diamond sparkles.
Wind blows gritty sand.
We snuggle on the blanket.
Peacefully, until sunrise –

© July 13, 2011
Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Elaine George

July 18, 2011 at 11:26 AM

Beautiful Tanka, Dane Ann. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 18, 2011 at 10:14 AM

Congratulations on your win Dane Ann in the contest of Francine M. Roberts "Tanka You". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 17, 2011 at 5:49 PM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of Francine, Dane

Sara Kendrick

July 17, 2011 at 1:03 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 16, 2011 at 9:47 PM

Congrats Dane Ann on another grand win with this great poetry luv.. good description of The East Coast luv..

Francine Roberts

July 16, 2011 at 9:19 PM

congrats on your 10th place win in the contest Dane Ann

James Peranteau

July 15, 2011 at 5:02 AM

Such a soft and quixotic picture Dane Ann ! I knew that I should peek in on your writes..I needed this one ! One funny and one dreamy ! Later gator ! Much love, james