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The East Coast

We two, hot, muggy. Lay beneath diamond sparkles. Wind blows gritty sand. We snuggle on the blanket. Peacefully, until sunrise – © July 13, 2011 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Date: 7/18/2011 11:26:00 AM
Beautiful Tanka, Dane Ann. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
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Date: 7/18/2011 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dane Ann in the contest of Francine M. Roberts "Tanka You". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2011 5:49:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Francine, Dane
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Date: 7/17/2011 1:03:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 7/16/2011 9:47:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on another grand win with this great poetry luv.. good description of The East Coast luv..
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Date: 7/16/2011 9:19:00 PM
congrats on your 10th place win in the contest Dane Ann
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Date: 7/15/2011 5:02:00 AM
Such a soft and quixotic picture Dane Ann ! I knew that I should peek in on your writes..I needed this one ! One funny and one dreamy ! Later gator ! Much love, james
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Date: 7/14/2011 12:13:00 AM
Very romantic..good write...hugs
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