The Early Bird Story Poem

Before I stirred, the early bird
Built a nest on my head
Then on one date, it found a mate
Before I got out of bed

With outside dim, I tried beating him
When next day I arose sooner
But all I heard, were chirping birds
Leaving me in a bad humor

The very next day, to my dismay
The two birds perched on my leg
Loudly tweeting, and repeating
Implying they now have eggs

One week later the incubator,
Mrs. Early, from brooding all day
On her nest, and although a pest
Hatched her eggs, so I shouted yay

Since early birds, my idle words
Couldn’t slow them at their chore
Of feeding, what they were breeding
And wouldn’t you know at night they snore

The chicks grew fast, like no time passed
In their nest on top of my head
And when off they flew, that’s when I knew
I could finally get out of bed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 7/25/2023 4:07:00 PM
That’s one bad haircut Harry (to more or less paraphrase ’Jaws’). Smashingly amusing write, David. Congrats,
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Date: 7/25/2023 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative write. I enjoyed reading it. Have a great day.................
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Date: 7/25/2023 1:51:00 AM
A uniquely creative story, David! I loved the rhythm and internal rhyming here, and would have placed it higher, but unfortunately, I had strictly asked for aabb or abab rhyme scheme only...
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Date: 7/10/2023 4:12:00 AM
What an interesting story ! I wish if a bird had come to my house to make a nest, but never on my head at any rate, Lol. What fun it is to imagine you carrying a nest on your head and you lying on your bed watching all coming and going and every happening. A very humorous poem. I enjoyed it much. Thanks David for your visit to my page.
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