Dan Kearley Poet Rhyme

The Eagle

My soul has risen
To where the eagle flys
Also with the vision
Of the eagles eyes
My voice has now turned
To an eagles cry
With its wings of strength 
To sail the mountins high

I sail upon the breeze 
Just beneath the clouds
It's here that I
Am the only one allowed
I watch over all the earth
And the creations of man
Keeping an eye on those below 
Is all just part of Gods plan

If you dare to entice me
That would surely not be wise
For the feeble few that do
Are the foolish ones that die
So I sit upon the tallest tree
And watch you from afar
To see if I'm correct 
On the foolish ones there are




Dan Kearley 
6-21-12

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Carl Fraser November 26, 2012 at 2:56 PM Love the imagery here and message Dan, well done, blessings Carl

Andrea Dietrich June 25, 2012 at 9:18 PM Great stuff, Dan. I like this eagle eye view of the world and your taking the part of that great bird!

Gwendolen Song June 25, 2012 at 12:01 AM So here I sat rambling on and on like a bumbling idiot...HOW ABOUT THIS POEM!!!! PLacing your spirit inside the eagles and experiencing all the keen senses that an eagle senses is a swell idea for a poem...Nice club for you eagles up there in the clouds too...enjoyed much! gwendolen Dan Kearley June 25, 2012 at 12:25 AM Thanks.... :o)

Gwendolen Song June 24, 2012 at 11:57 PM Fascinated with eagles...my professor last year always had a live cam of an eagle's nest on the big screen projector and we were able to pause and reflect on God's greatest beast of the air...sometimes the father eagle would swoop down and drop a rat into the center of the nest and fly away...have u seen this? Just curious...Did me calling you Danny Boy take off like wild fire or was the name already glued to ya!? I am giggling at these funny remarks below....gwendolen Dan Kearley June 25, 2012 at 12:24 AM Ha,ha...No,that is my log in name here.. :oP That is also a name that has stuck with me thru out the years... I don't think I saw that video...But I have seen many others with the same type of thing going on. They are a beautiful creature.. :o)

Cindy Lu June 22, 2012 at 7:16 PM soupmail in a min.

Cindy Lu June 22, 2012 at 7:01 PM Hope you got the sight that the Eagle does. This is not your normal style of writing. You Okay? Miss you too friend, Cindy

Joann Grisetti June 22, 2012 at 8:34 AM So many foolish ones in the way of the eagle. Very stron first stanza.

Mad Hu June 21, 2012 at 5:14 AM Loved the first para.It seemed very positive.

Seren Roberts June 21, 2012 at 3:57 AM The tallest tree Without a doubt But sit still and behave Or you will fall out. Lol

Justcallme Britt June 21, 2012 at 1:31 AM Sit back, watch and don't speak until provoked.........

Anne-Lise Andresen June 21, 2012 at 1:00 AM One of your best written poem Dan, like it a lot. - Well done my f.e.f. - oxox love Anne-Lise