The Dying Swan

on that day
she performed the dance
in a mortal silence

- lustful intensity,

the unusual
exit with the back
was hiding her face
without any wave of hope,
the eyes
where
seeking consolation,
her spine
became alive
like a tempting serpent,
- arms
were wavy wings
a cry for help,
legs outstretched
like two cello strings
rising
under the guidance
of internal forces,

the pirouettes
faked
with a great talent
the lack of courage,
as a sacrifice brought to the air
she kept doing
dozens of rotations
as if
the body
was anointed
with the dark air,

then,

it fell into its arms
like a wet coat,

every movement
spoke
again and again
"I love you
and
I hate you",

sun rase
died
in a light
that bowed obediently
under the
the public eyes
riveted
like a forest
of frozen trees,
waiting for
- what's next

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 5/31/2021 12:26:00 PM
A Beautiful Poem.
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Maria Mitea
Date: 6/3/2021 6:22:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj for reading! All my gratitude to you! Maria,
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