Jannie Breedt Poet Free verse

The Dust Devil

Loneliness the circles
In which the daydream never ends
I wish you'd go away those times
So I could find you once again

Perhaps a hole-in -middle whirlpool
The nothing that ever stays
A fist of clenching handful
A farmer begging God for rain

A plague of desperation
No welcome needs around
The sideway glance of people
As if you were a paedophile

An intrusion of their selfish plans
A car with a one way steering wheel
Thats always headed home
A dust devil with nowhere else to go

A ship that wayward stranded
Marooned on a broken beach
A schoolroom devoid of students
And theres nothing else to teach

Sitting so low in the restaurant
Furtive glances all eyes on me
I walk through them, they look through me
I'm a drive-thru KFC

Her virtue were her beauty spot
But she drove the rain to tears
Eating chicken in the parking lot
She didnt fit with all my fears

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Andrea Dietrich December 1, 2017 at 8:52 PM This one is sure deep and the different images all add up to such gloom and melancholy feelings! Love the images! Jannie Breedt December 20, 2017 at 1:52 PM You nailed it . All true. Will catch up soon on all my beautiful friends . Ty. Hugs here

Patricia Cresswell December 1, 2017 at 1:50 PM This has the sound of woeful desperation to it words. A tug of war within ones self about many things not just a person. Take care my friend you have written a worrisome poem. Inner turmoil. Jannie Breedt December 20, 2017 at 1:51 PM Oi Patricia, how did I miss you here? As always thank you..yes indeed desperation more like when you dont feel at home in your own skin. Soon I will be more forthcoming. Im fixing some mojo here

Silent One December 1, 2017 at 6:03 AM Some excellent lines of poetry in this deep poem... So much emotion you have expressed.. simply excellent Jannie Breedt December 1, 2017 at 8:12 AM Thank you most graciously S.O. Youre in my circle of friends. You write so well

Maria Williams December 1, 2017 at 1:37 AM A very deep and plaintive write Jannie which I liked - You've covered a whole spectrum from loneliness, to drought, loss of direction, all of which can be equated to our own emotional drought and uncertainty and then your last verse! Have a great festive break - not long to go now - It's summer in our part of the world now...Maria Jannie Breedt December 1, 2017 at 8:10 AM Hi Maria, your power of observation is a true gift. Thank you. Its summer down here now . Late rain brought relief.from the incindinary heat. Have a wonderful dec where ever you are

Freddie Robinson Jr. November 30, 2017 at 12:24 PM I love the emotional grit of this poem, Jannie. Powerful lines, esp ... virtue was her beauty spot ... she didn't fit w/all my fears. Your cosmic pen moves in uncharted galactic skies. Another outstanding write, my dear friend. Love and more love always. Jannie Breedt December 20, 2017 at 1:56 PM You truly inspire me and I so wished you lived next door so can get more. Thank you Freddie. Love back to you

Jannie Breedt November 28, 2017 at 10:41 PM The silly season is on us, yes. Thank you for making me aware. Hope you had a nice break and that things are upbeat over there.

Connie Marcum Wong November 28, 2017 at 5:55 PM Loneliness is rampant this time of year. I hope poetry will bring you cheer my friend. I haven't been around because of the holiday. It is good to be back. I hope you are well. Blessings, Connie