The Duchess

I sat next to the Duchess at tea. It was worse than I thought would be. A bee sat on her nose The Duchess turn'd verbose When it stung her right there but not me. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp200 Copyright@2014 October.21.2014

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 11/1/2014 10:42:00 AM

WOW WOW...a bee sting on nose.. what about a sting in the tail D ? love...rajat

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/1/2014 1:55:00 PM

Thats coming on the next chapter of the Duchess Rajat! Lol....Thank you for your visit and humorous nice comment! ;) D.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/22/2014 11:25:00 PM

Haha...love it sweetie... Hugs

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/1/2014 1:53:00 PM

Thank you so much Tim! ;) D.

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/22/2014 8:52:00 PM

Dorian "D" . . . Beautiful Limerick here my dear. At least the Bee got the Duchess to shut up. I do like the versatility of your poetic writes. I have many more other themes to pursue now as we begin winding down this year. A "7" from me, and do take a look at my latest Romance poem which I posted a few hours back. All the best to you "D." Cheers, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/1/2014 1:52:00 PM

Thank you Gary my dear friend for your visit and all. You're so sweet! ;) xxxx D

Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/22/2014 12:18:00 PM

Interesting write my friend, it must have hurt the Duchess quite a bit, to be stung and you were very lucky it was not you my lady, lol I'm working on what you asked for but why so much gnomes? cheri

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/1/2014 1:51:00 PM

Thank you Cheryl! About the gnomes, that am afraid is a long story that for personal reason I can not answer.! ;) Lol. Take care my dear friend. ;) Xxxx D.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/22/2014 4:12:00 AM

smiling beautifully crafted dorian excellent picture

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/1/2014 1:48:00 PM

Thank you so much my sweet friend Liam! Nice to know you smiled. ;) Xxxxx D.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/21/2014 11:20:00 PM

Truely enjoyed Dorian, And I thought the Duchess was going to get stung on her nose. :) eve

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/1/2014 1:47:00 PM

She did Eve! Lol.... Thank you for your visit my dear sweet friend. Love and Hugs! ;) xxxx D.