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The Dry Lips

a crimson fly swims in the cup of black coffee the dry lips look on March 20, 2018

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Mick Talbot

Date: 3/22/2018 10:36:00 PM

A haiku comment............................................................ crimson flies drink black... coffee... they all love the taste... no dry lips for them... .............................................................. Mick

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/22/2018 10:44:00 PM

Certainly no dry lips for them ... If it were so, they would not have been onlookers ... Then whose dry lips?... intriguing again indeed ...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 3/20/2018 9:51:00 PM

A big smile, Probir. This poem tickled my heart w/dawn laughter. Mighty fine poetry. Love and joy always.

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/21/2018 10:02:00 PM

Thank you, Freddie ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/20/2018 3:25:00 PM

- Great !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/21/2018 10:02:00 PM

Thanks, Sunshine ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/20/2018 12:56:00 PM

Haha! A good one my friend, Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/21/2018 10:04:00 PM

Thank you, Demetrios ...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/19/2018 9:01:00 PM

No! Not in the coffee ;) great images

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/20/2018 10:47:00 AM

Thank you so much ...