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The Dry Ice of November

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The Dry Ice of November David J Walker There was once a time dead leaves devoid of pallor Were raked into a a mound of pyre Great heaps dissolved In a funeral fire Releasing the last of What they were Into the Autumn air The scent of dry November from a distance announced everywhere Then The cold Seemed that much Colder And the November sun Much less bolder Returning so much later In the morning East Dissolving sooner in the Evening West The dry ice of November A precursor To the winter

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Date: 11/15/2020 12:26:00 PM
I love the images created here, David and could almost smell those burning leaves and hear the crackling of the fire in my imagination. I'm not sure why and no pun is intended here but I felt a touch of Frost as I read it. You have a real gift in your ability to draw us in with your beautiful voice too. I really enjoyed this.
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Date: 11/15/2020 3:07:00 PM
Thank you Wendy, Very kind words. I have vivid memories of burning leaves in Autumn in Colorado as a young boy. I would help my father rake them up and he would strike a match. I love Autumn. I loved the first snow before Christmas too.

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