The Drunken Elements

The midnight sea, 
Seeps through me, 
Departing me from melancholy.

Into thy branches of blissful breeze, 
Within a ray of sunshine enclosing;
thee by sensual Symphony.

Beneath thine silver chest-nut tree,
Amongst thine swirling dwellers,
In a womb thy heavens did bring,
With a scent as swell as thy presence meet. 

Obviating the seizure, letting me free;
From spells and all atrocious dreams.

Endorsing my soul with thine sip of oenomel, 
Plunging into thine boulevard of tainted sheets,
Caressing me, into a deep divine gentle sleep..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/16/2016 5:45:00 AM
Hello Sofiya, the uncommon word pairing of "atrocious dreams" really works in this piece. Welcome to soup. This site has many ways to connect to poets. You can click on member names and read their poetry, too, and a good link is the new poems -- it shows the newest poems posted. This is a great site to grow as a poet! Nice to meet you.
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Carmael William
Date: 9/19/2016 8:50:00 AM
Its nice to meet u too.. :)
Date: 9/16/2016 2:06:00 AM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Date: 9/19/2016 8:51:00 AM
I appreciate it the most, thank u..
Date: 9/15/2016 11:11:00 PM
OOOO, SO GOOD Sofiya,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/19/2016 8:53:00 AM
Thank u too for such a warm welcome.. And it would be an honour to be your friend.. :* ;)
Date: 9/15/2016 7:42:00 PM
Sofiya,,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/19/2016 8:57:00 AM
You have the most wonderful poems and so do all, humble members.. It is indeed an inspiration for poets who are new to this field, thank you for your support and time.. Pay it forward thats wt i shall do.. Thank u once again.. ?????
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