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The Drifter

for but a moment
the moon shall rest on the sea
drifting with the tide

Written for Raul's contest.
I love that picture Raul -

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/9/2010 5:38:00 PM

so lovely! Light & Love

James Fraser

Date: 12/21/2009 2:30:00 PM

Very nice Haiku Michael, well deserved of your 2nd place in Raul's fine contest >> James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/19/2009 2:32:00 AM

Congratulations Michael, on your success in Raul’s Reflections contest with this skillful poem. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/10/2009 11:10:00 AM

Love this one for even without the picture I could picture it. Keep the magical pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 12/10/2009 8:30:00 AM

May your poetry blossom in many directions in2010 Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/7/2009 5:11:00 AM

"It is better late than never", they say. Congratulations on your 2nd Place win in Raul's "Reflections" Contest! Well-deserved! Peace and love, Audrey

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/6/2009 1:41:00 AM

This is powerful, Michael. All the best in the contest. It is so good to know that fire burns with love in your belly still, my friend. Bravo!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 12/4/2009 4:04:00 PM

Michael, surely, this is one of the finest haiku's I have had the immense pleasure of reading! fav! many congrats! jimbo

Brandee Augustus

Date: 12/4/2009 12:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your second palce finish in Raul's Reflection contest!

Elaine George

Date: 12/3/2009 8:38:00 AM

Beuatiful, Michael. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/2/2009 7:51:00 PM

I totally agree with you, MJ, that picture is just beautiful and your haiku captures that enchanting fleeting moment like the camera captured that scene--congrats on your win in Raul's contest! Enjoy your day!