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The Drifter

for but a moment
the moon shall rest on the sea
drifting with the tide

Written for Raul's contest.
I love that picture Raul -

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/21/2010 2:14:00 PM
I never saw the picture, but this is a wonderful 'universal' Haiku. Chris.
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Date: 2/9/2010 5:38:00 PM
so lovely! Light & Love
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Date: 12/21/2009 2:30:00 PM
Very nice Haiku Michael, well deserved of your 2nd place in Raul's fine contest >> James
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Date: 12/19/2009 2:32:00 AM
Congratulations Michael, on your success in Raul’s Reflections contest with this skillful poem. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 12/10/2009 11:10:00 AM
Love this one for even without the picture I could picture it. Keep the magical pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara
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Date: 12/10/2009 8:30:00 AM
May your poetry blossom in many directions in2010 Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 12/7/2009 5:11:00 AM
"It is better late than never", they say. Congratulations on your 2nd Place win in Raul's "Reflections" Contest! Well-deserved! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/6/2009 1:41:00 AM
This is powerful, Michael. All the best in the contest. It is so good to know that fire burns with love in your belly still, my friend. Bravo!
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Date: 12/4/2009 4:04:00 PM
Michael, surely, this is one of the finest haiku's I have had the immense pleasure of reading! fav! many congrats! jimbo
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Date: 12/4/2009 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your second palce finish in Raul's Reflection contest!
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Date: 12/3/2009 8:38:00 AM
Beuatiful, Michael. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/2/2009 7:51:00 PM
I totally agree with you, MJ, that picture is just beautiful and your haiku captures that enchanting fleeting moment like the camera captured that scene--congrats on your win in Raul's contest! Enjoy your day!
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Date: 12/2/2009 4:47:00 PM
Awesome win Michael. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 12/2/2009 4:19:00 PM
Awesome Haiku , Michael. Congratulations ! _Robert
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Date: 12/2/2009 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations on winning in Raul's contest! What a beautiful haiku! ~Juliane
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Date: 12/2/2009 1:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Contest! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/2/2009 9:46:00 AM
This has such a peaceful feel to it. Congratulations on placing second in Raul's contest. Another honor for you to enjoy. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 12/2/2009 8:28:00 AM
Well, you havent lost your touch! Michael, this is beautiful and Im so happy for your success in the contest. BG
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Date: 12/2/2009 8:05:00 AM
nicely penned, congrats on the win!!
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Date: 12/2/2009 7:47:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Michael.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/2/2009 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations to you my neighbor! 2nd place!!! A beautiful haiku and a peaceful picture of the moon! Lovely!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/2/2009 5:03:00 AM
Congrats, Michael, on your 2nd place win in Raul's contest... well deserved win.. blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart"
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Date: 12/2/2009 3:13:00 AM
Congratulations Michael on your second place win. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/2/2009 2:36:00 AM
MJ, congratulations in winning 2nd place in my contest...Raul
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Date: 11/25/2009 4:42:00 PM
hi Michael, its been a long time, I love the way this flows so peaceful and serene, Dnyce
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