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The Dream In the Sky

In this dark and gloomy room, staring out the window to the bright and mysterious moon. The winking stars in the sky, so conceited, above the slow and gentle clouds floating by. I close my eyes, and dream of her and I, in the sky, on those slow and gentle clouds, swiftly, gently floating by. Holding hands, I hold her tight, for the fear of her falling from the sky. But if she were to slip, I would bet she'd fly on wings of meditation, like the angel I know of her to be. But on the clouds we quietly lay, gazing up upon that bright moon. I look at her, thinking to myself. "You are so beautiful. I wish we could lay here forever." She looks at me, I softly say, "I love you." Then, she disappears.. I awaken to a tear running down my face. I look back out the window to that bright and mysterious moon.. But, it's gone now. Big, puffy, gray clouds cover it.. Then, it starts to rain.

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Date: 1/13/2014 12:26:00 PM
Hi Antonio, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/12/2014 3:15:00 PM
sweeter and sweeter
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Date: 1/12/2014 3:09:00 PM
Deeper and deeper. <----- it was a deep poem gripping it its best. About this poem. you took the reader into a deep sad dream. very gloomy, amazing imagery. Antonio, , I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 1/12/2014 3:15:00 PM
That's not what I do Antonio, that's a fun loving pen name I stuck with, since I joined the soup... I would never harm a fly. Okay maybe only if its in my soup. Lol
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Antonio Mack
Date: 1/12/2014 3:13:00 PM
Thank you very much. Im really glad you didnt destroy my poetry. Lol :-)
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Date: 1/12/2014 3:10:00 PM
typo. .gripping at its best
Date: 1/12/2014 1:04:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Antonio- I choose your first poem and hope you will write many more in the future. - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many ... but has plenty of room for you too. - PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone.(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - <3 from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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Antonio Mack
Date: 1/12/2014 1:24:00 PM
I feel so welcome here! Lol. PEACE AND MUCH LOVE! :-)

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