The Dream

From the mouth of the ocean and the eye of the wave
You erupt in my being and leap from my grave;
A lover so gloomy, yet dreadfully bright
You're clothed with darkness but crowned with light.
You come in the spark, you soar with the fire
The mist is your pillow, the tornado your choir;
I will kiss you to sleep on the wild ocean crest
A sleeping volcano, an earthquake at rest.
When you feel the earth move under your feet
The sun will bathe you with her sultry heat;
Let not the stars dim the light in your eyes
Let not my passion find you unwise,
For all that you are is to be all that you can
For you are the dream, you are my man.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 7:32 PM
soup mail again! (X3)
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May 24, 2012 at 8:37 PM
soup mail... :)
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May 23, 2012 at 7:53 PM
Are you familiar with the works of Sylvia Plath and Anne Sexton? They were the queens of confessional poetry. Remarkable phrasing, flow and rhyme, and arresting imagery.
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April 1, 2012 at 9:44 AM
enjoyed reading your work today.
Kapoor Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 8:51 PM
Another beautiful Poem from your sweet and wonderful pens my friend. There are pleasing depths in this lovely write in which many things appears to be floating together. Great one and a sweet one as well. Love and best wishes .... Ravindra
Situation Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 11:07 AM
this is what i mean when i say masterful. there is a nobelness in this piece that reaches a divine level. it's one of your best. T. S.
Goudreau Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 10:55 AM
Wow, this is a masterpiece and I've truly enjoyed reading this lovely poem. Heartfelt and very moving poetry. Million thx for sharing And May God Bless!
J.T. Avatar
November 21, 2011 at 7:47 PM
WOW. Very well written. - JH
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November 21, 2011 at 5:48 AM
Great Lizzy... I love the the personification ''mouth of the ocean, eyes of the wave, sleeping volcano, restin earth earthquake.. Too much capturing and well writen. Love Mathy
Treetop Avatar
November 21, 2011 at 1:33 AM
So cleverly written, I read the second poem first. Oh dear some people never ever learn thank goodness poetry can set it right!
Rhinem Avatar
November 20, 2011 at 4:29 PM
Ps. * Just wished to stop back by, my dear Beautiful Elizabeth * Not only to inform your gifted and lovely beauty that I admire very much your treasures gifted verse and loving heart but also I do see, to dispell dear John's statement below in regards as unto myself -- Smile * My luv always and forever, John *
Green Avatar
November 20, 2011 at 11:55 AM
so sweet in its creation,,,what a dream,,,and love of another...
D. Avatar
November 20, 2011 at 11:00 AM
very cool tying the forces of nature into your poem
Horne Avatar
November 19, 2011 at 2:32 PM
Ah, but all was not well - so she killed him... Both lovely pieces, my friend
Minardi Avatar
November 19, 2011 at 9:47 AM
I love this one. Every single line has been written beautifully. Love the rhymes too. :)
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November 18, 2011 at 2:02 PM
I love this one. another masterpiece
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November 18, 2011 at 1:01 AM
this is one of the most beautiful poetry i've read so far in the soup about love...
Rhinem Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 11:03 AM
Sweeetbeauty
Horsman Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 10:08 AM
wonderful tribute to love, that man sure is lucky, elizabeth. harry
Aul Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 1:05 PM
A very heartfelt write...someone's dream of me is usually a nightmare............George
Horne Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 12:30 PM
What a beautiful and romantic piece, Lizzy
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November 16, 2011 at 11:43 AM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery to share your thoughts. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
Green Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 6:05 AM
that was so amazing,,,draws me into the emotion,,,and makes me wanting more...
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November 15, 2011 at 5:34 PM
Awesome imagery lines thoughts and descriptive emotion among other delights that fill this poem to the brim. Outstanding and actually shocking there is so much in so few lines. Hard hittling and fast delivery. Amazing Elizabeth
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November 15, 2011 at 1:44 PM
Oh, Elizabeth, this is such an eloquent tribute to the man you love. We have to realize that we can't change people -- we just accept them for who they are. So glad you have found your dream man! Love, carolyn
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