The Dream

Hands held high like a bed of roses.
Red all around like a sea of blood.
You scream for me with shock in pain.
The sound that froze me and made me stare.
I turn my face to see you in a white dress,
like a lonely angel in the demons world.
Swiftly I come and stand by your side,
fearing the sight behind my eyes.

I carry you with my burned rusted hands
but the pain is little compared to the love that I have,
running from the shadows, we meet the naked red hands.
The hands that try to pull us to the shadows
but I am strong and shall not wither.
I clasp the angel of my broken soul between my hands,
the white twilight of the lost space of my heart.
I will fight for you and never back down.

I stumble to my knees and hit the shredded knives,
that bloodied the white dress of my only love,
but scream I do not for I am the hero of the hazel eyes.
The eyes that stare at me with shock and fear.
The devil within me struck out and hit life,
making me scream with my eyes filled with black
and all was silent.

A door appears in front of a mystic light and I
open it with my bleeding knee.
Blinded I am and my eyes burn like fire.
I was laying with her by my side.
Her scent killed the numbness that filled my mind
and all was gone when the dream was done.

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9th place in "The dreams. contest.."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 8:03 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~P.D.'s~ "The Dreams" contest Sami. Love, Carol
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 5:00 PM
Sami, I liked this poem a lot. You have the ability to tell a story and keep the reader interested, throughout. I really enjoyed reading it. Congrats on making PD's winners' list....................S.Ronthorpe
Johnson Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 4:07 PM
very vivid sort of dream mate, another reality, somewhere in the mist...
Konos Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 2:46 PM
A very good one Sami...and of great importance...is Dr Ram's comment...we have been looking for him for a long time and it is delightful to see that he is back....
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 4:10 AM
Congratulations Sami, a well deserved win xx
Helbaoui Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 11:51 AM
Thank you for much! I'm really happy with my placement :D
A   Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 7:55 PM
SAMI.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful dreamy poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
Helbaoui Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 11:50 AM
And thank you for the placement! :D
Tacito Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 12:24 PM
I highly enjoyed this. Great & strong lines.
Segal Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 6:04 AM
A great write, thank you also for your lovely comments, love, Simone
Helbaoui Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 5:48 AM
Thank you very much Dr.Ram but i think I'm late for the competition... I can't find it posted anymore.. :(
Mehta Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 4:30 AM
Very creative and fantastic end to the story, Sami
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