The Dream

I was dreaming "THE DREAM' as they say A beautiful young girl came my way We both got excited our passions ignited then I woke up, which ruined my day!

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 7/19/2011 8:03:00 AM

very funny Ralph but real! Been there done that!

Edward Mccormick

Date: 7/13/2011 1:30:00 PM

Kudos, dude. I too feel the pain of waking from "THE DREAM' all too soon. Great Limerick, winner. ~ECMc

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/13/2011 12:33:00 PM

Congrats Ralph on your super fifth place in this contest with an elegant entry my friend.. another wow piece ,,,

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2011 9:11:00 AM

Congratulations Ralph for your win in the contest "A Poem You Like" sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/13/2011 6:23:00 AM

LOl lots of smiles Ralph from this win....

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/13/2011 1:32:00 AM

great one, ralph..special KUDOS to you for the superb win!...huggs

Earle Brown

Date: 7/24/2010 12:42:00 PM

Lovely limerick. Makes me laugh.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2010 12:16:00 PM

Oh, big bummer, Ralph. This for me would have been a top contestant!! Luv, Andrea

Constance La France

Date: 7/23/2010 11:29:00 AM

Your poem might be to late for the contest but it was not too late to delight the reader ~ a very nice limerick ~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/23/2010 6:48:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Ralph. I will be away for the weekend and will be back to read Monday. May you have a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol