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the dream

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"the dream"

the dream begins

there lies a dream filled with color and light
I wait for the day we meet face to face
my search and quest shall never fade
patiently I forever hope and believe

the dream awaits

for my wanted ambitions I will achieve
the glory will transform like a butterfly
when this happens darkness will then erase
my soul will take a soaring flight

the dream remains

tomorrow the dream at last will come true
nevermore with magnificent color and light

the dream will be

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04-10-24

Copyright © Lisa Ricci | Year Posted 2024

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 8/11/2024 4:03:00 PM Hello Lisa Rico, I hope your dream will come true. Hugs. /Darlene/ Login to Reply

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 4/28/2024 6:21:00 AM Lovely piece Lisa, dreams make such good poetry as they are full of contrasts too. hope all is well with you, blessings lovingly yours, Gordon Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 4/30/2024 5:15:00 AM Good Morning Gordon. Hello. It's so nice to see you. Thank you ever so much. Truly. I do not take words or reviews for granted. I very much enjoyed your intake on dreams with poetry. I hope all is well with you also. Have a wonderful morning and day. I will see you on your page. Blessings back to you. Thank you for that along with peace. (smile)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 4/25/2024 12:49:00 AM How lovely would it be for us all to. Meet to mingle and chat and get tto know each other. I feel we will see that day come to fruition . How are you my friend Love your your awesome poem to your friends in Poetry Soup . Keep well and in touch. Something is missing when you don't read my poem.. HUgs and blessings. Jennifer Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 4/26/2024 9:19:00 AM Dear Jennifer. Hi. You are fabulous. I am overwhelmed by your commentary. Truly. Thank you. Thank you. I hope all is well. I will see you soon on your page. Have a wonderful day and weekend too. Peace Blessings and Health always. (smile)

Tom Cunningham Date: 4/17/2024 2:45:00 AM Dreams can certainly come true Lisa and we can make them happen. Hope you're keeping well and greetings from Crete. Tom Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 4/26/2024 9:17:00 AM Hello Tom. Thank you ever so much. Yes with believing I think we can make thinks happen. You're right. As always thank you for such generosity and for your intake. Words do not express my appreciation. I'm sorry for this late response. Since posting I've been even busier because my brother had an unexpected cardiac catheterization and my mom was in a car accident so I've been play nurse and taxi driver and my nerves are shot. Have a wonderful day and weekend. May this day find you well Tom. Thank you again. I will see you soon on your page. Peace and Blessings along with health always. (smile)

Paul Callus Date: 4/14/2024 1:20:00 AM When positive minds set out on a journey of discovery, then any dream stands a good chance of becoming reality, Lisa! Dream...believe...make possible :) Peace & blessings // paul Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 4/26/2024 9:13:00 AM Hi Paul. Thank you so very much. Your intake and commentary are beautiful and lovely. Truly. I am once again sorry for being behind and for this late response to such a review. May this day find you well. Have a wonderful day and weekend too. Blessings and Peace back to you as well. I will see you soon on your page. (smile)

Tonye George Date: 4/13/2024 5:38:00 AM Keep dreaming my dear Lisa. Our strength is the continuous ability to dream even when we don't remember, or the paths aren't smooth. Live your life, soar as far as the heavens can go. Great piece dear. Thank you. Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 4/30/2024 5:18:00 AM Dear Tonye. Good Morning. I am so very sorry for this extremely late response. Truly. Your review commentary and intake are all beautiful and most gracious. I hope my entry and work are deserving of your generosity. Thus, it is I who thanks you. May you life your life and soar as well. I love that. Have a beautiful day with love peace happiness beauty blessings and much more. I will see you on your page. Thank you again. (smile)

Bill Baker Date: 4/12/2024 9:09:00 PM Dream on my kind and loving friend. Thanks for sharing your gentle poetry with us. Have a pleasant evening. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 4/26/2024 9:07:00 AM It is I who thanks you Bill. Truly. And yes, may you keep dreaming too. Dream of all things good. Have a wonderful day and weekend too. I hope all is well with you and Sara. I will see you soon on your page. Love Peace and Blessings always along with health. (smile)

Ink Empress Date: 4/12/2024 12:46:00 PM Dear lisa, as always you come back with a poem that resonates deeply and hits so strong in such an evocative manner. I love this, and fits my mood too right now. I especially love the lines “ there lies a dream filled with color and light I wait for the day we meet face to face my search and quest shall never fade patiently I forever hope and believe“ keep believinv and hoping and let those dreams stay alive and close to you! What a sincere anr beautiful poem this is! Pleasure reading! Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 4/26/2024 9:05:00 AM Oh Empress. Thank you Thank you. Truly. Your generous commentary and review mean the world and I do not take them or you for granted. I'm sorry for this late response. I seem to get further and further behind and poetry takes a back seat. I hope my entry and I of your commentary are worthy. Have a beautiful day and weekend too filled with Peace Blessings and Light. I will see you soon on your page. (smile)