the dream

hello its been awhile I hope this is worthy of poetrysoup and poetry itself thank you "the dream" the dream begins there lies a dream filled with color and light I wait for the day we meet face to face my search and quest shall never fade patiently I forever hope and believe the dream awaits for my wanted ambitions I will achieve the glory will transform like a butterfly when this happens darkness will then erase my soul will take a soaring flight the dream remains tomorrow the dream at last will come true nevermore with magnificent color and light the dream will be SkyWatcher 04-10-24

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 4/28/2024 6:21:00 AM

Lovely piece Lisa, dreams make such good poetry as they are full of contrasts too. hope all is well with you, blessings lovingly yours, Gordon

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/30/2024 5:15:00 AM

Good Morning Gordon. Hello. It's so nice to see you. Thank you ever so much. Truly. I do not take words or reviews for granted. I very much enjoyed your intake on dreams with poetry. I hope all is well with you also. Have a wonderful morning and day. I will see you on your page. Blessings back to you. Thank you for that along with peace. (smile)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/25/2024 12:49:00 AM

How lovely would it be for us all to. Meet to mingle and chat and get tto know each other. I feel we will see that day come to fruition . How are you my friend Love your your awesome poem to your friends in Poetry Soup . Keep well and in touch. Something is missing when you don't read my poem.. HUgs and blessings. Jennifer

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/26/2024 9:19:00 AM

Dear Jennifer. Hi. You are fabulous. I am overwhelmed by your commentary. Truly. Thank you. Thank you. I hope all is well. I will see you soon on your page. Have a wonderful day and weekend too. Peace Blessings and Health always. (smile)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/17/2024 2:45:00 AM

Dreams can certainly come true Lisa and we can make them happen. Hope you're keeping well and greetings from Crete. Tom

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/26/2024 9:17:00 AM

Hello Tom. Thank you ever so much. Yes with believing I think we can make thinks happen. You're right. As always thank you for such generosity and for your intake. Words do not express my appreciation. I'm sorry for this late response. Since posting I've been even busier because my brother had an unexpected cardiac catheterization and my mom was in a car accident so I've been play nurse and taxi driver and my nerves are shot. Have a wonderful day and weekend. May this day find you well Tom. Thank you again. I will see you soon on your page. Peace and Blessings along with health always. (smile)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/14/2024 1:20:00 AM

When positive minds set out on a journey of discovery, then any dream stands a good chance of becoming reality, Lisa! Dream...believe...make possible :) Peace & blessings // paul

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/26/2024 9:13:00 AM

Hi Paul. Thank you so very much. Your intake and commentary are beautiful and lovely. Truly. I am once again sorry for being behind and for this late response to such a review. May this day find you well. Have a wonderful day and weekend too. Blessings and Peace back to you as well. I will see you soon on your page. (smile)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/13/2024 5:38:00 PM

such a gentle and evocative poem, Lisa. Keep dreaming, Lisa. You inspire us all. hugs, Sara

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/26/2024 9:11:00 AM

You Too Sara. You too. Thank you and Hi. I guess you could say I try to convince myself too (smile smile smile). I hope I am deserving of all your wonderful comments and intake. Never do I take them or you for granted. Have a wonderful day and weekend too. Love Blessings and Peace along with health always. I will see you soon on your page. (smile)

Tonye George

Date: 4/13/2024 5:38:00 AM

Keep dreaming my dear Lisa. Our strength is the continuous ability to dream even when we don't remember, or the paths aren't smooth. Live your life, soar as far as the heavens can go. Great piece dear. Thank you.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/30/2024 5:18:00 AM

Dear Tonye. Good Morning. I am so very sorry for this extremely late response. Truly. Your review commentary and intake are all beautiful and most gracious. I hope my entry and work are deserving of your generosity. Thus, it is I who thanks you. May you life your life and soar as well. I love that. Have a beautiful day with love peace happiness beauty blessings and much more. I will see you on your page. Thank you again. (smile)

Bill Baker

Date: 4/12/2024 9:09:00 PM

Dream on my kind and loving friend. Thanks for sharing your gentle poetry with us. Have a pleasant evening. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/26/2024 9:07:00 AM

It is I who thanks you Bill. Truly. And yes, may you keep dreaming too. Dream of all things good. Have a wonderful day and weekend too. I hope all is well with you and Sara. I will see you soon on your page. Love Peace and Blessings always along with health. (smile)

Ink Empress

Date: 4/12/2024 12:46:00 PM

Dear lisa, as always you come back with a poem that resonates deeply and hits so strong in such an evocative manner. I love this, and fits my mood too right now. I especially love the lines “ there lies a dream filled with color and light I wait for the day we meet face to face my search and quest shall never fade patiently I forever hope and believe“ keep believinv and hoping and let those dreams stay alive and close to you! What a sincere anr beautiful poem this is! Pleasure reading!

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/26/2024 9:05:00 AM

Oh Empress. Thank you Thank you. Truly. Your generous commentary and review mean the world and I do not take them or you for granted. I'm sorry for this late response. I seem to get further and further behind and poetry takes a back seat. I hope my entry and I of your commentary are worthy. Have a beautiful day and weekend too filled with Peace Blessings and Light. I will see you soon on your page. (smile)