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The Dream

He races aggressively from task to task, churning through projects and products and pay. Optimize, order, overdeliver. Improve! For fast fades the day ... You'd think he bores easy and can't sit still, can't admire slow pleasures of life. And you know it's pride or fear that drives him, though he claims most of it's for a wife. But you're wrong ... in his heart - hooked up to adrenaline drips - he fights for a dream of utter tranquility: holding her, kissing her eager lips. Slow love in a garden of beauty sublime. No more pain. No progress of matter. Just two hearts caught up in excelsior spirals, while soul-bursting tears freely spatter ... 18 September 2023

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Date: 9/19/2023 7:38:00 PM
I absolutely love this. The last stanza is enchanting ;)
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J. I. Thomas F.
Date: 9/19/2023 9:09:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 9/19/2023 6:47:00 PM
Dear J. I., a very emotive poem. Poignant and potent! Congratulations for your excellent win in Robert's contest. warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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J. I. Thomas F.
Date: 9/19/2023 9:09:00 PM
Thanks for reading!
Date: 9/19/2023 8:41:00 AM
Oh my. A melancholy and soul-touching write. Congratulations! :)
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J. I. Thomas F.
Date: 9/19/2023 9:09:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 9/18/2023 6:09:00 PM
Sounds like love to me! I'm down for some of that slow love:) Great to read you again my dear old friend. Hoping you are well.
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J. I. Thomas F.
Date: 9/19/2023 9:09:00 PM
Doing good. Thanks for reading!

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