The Dreaded Doctor's Visit

Other people are chatting.
I am not.
Some are pretending to read.
Ha!  As if you could
In a doctor’s office.

I am sixty-six, and still do not want to be here.
Because of my fear of a prick, a shot, an I.V.
It takes a long time to get over these things.
I am not over them yet.

They call my name.  Crap!
I just sat down, take someone else
I silently think.
But partly glad that I will not have to dread it any longer.

Everyone else looks up, relieved it is me being led and not them.
A few smile along my route.
I want to stick out my tongue, but I catch myself.
I head in to meet my doom, and face the lying weight machine.


I see the doctor. She mentions pills.
Then she remembers my stomach problems, so she cheerfully says
“It’s a shot for you!”

Ouch!
Oh, you’re a bleeder, the nurse says. “A big bleeder.”
Come here, and let me show you, I think.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/12/2018 1:56:00 AM
Too few people appreciate that the rigors of everyday life can be expressed very artfully. You've got it down cold here.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/12/2018 10:37:00 AM
Thank you Lawrence. I was sitting in the doctor's office, and boom! They called my name. It was uphill from there.
Date: 7/11/2018 8:05:00 PM
Not only I am afraid of injection, but also avoid Doctor till I am compelled to visit.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/12/2018 12:46:00 AM
Believe me, I was compelled! Sore shoulder for two weeks. Tendons.
Date: 7/11/2018 1:38:00 PM
I can't stand a prick of the needle myself...Nice one Caren
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/12/2018 12:46:00 AM
Thank you Arturo. I had written half of one word when the nurse came to get me.
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