The Downpourer

I feel forgiveness not displace
by serving as to God erase,
that small conjecture thought's retrace
some living gesture, mounting's place!

And so it is, discovery's haze
is thus confirmed, a realness earned
and no opinion can dissuade 
creative downpour of Hope's save!

As so, God waiting for our grace
to modify the Earth's conflicts,
some human nature's biased crave
attuned to hurling with life's tricks!

Be customary not my thought
to ordinary played out trust
as Heaven's downpour, mine is caught
to changing monumental dust!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Guzzi Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 4:50 PM
I enjoyed your poetic thoughts this evening- a verse to be read more than once!Light & Love
Lindsay Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 4:01 PM
This reminds me that I am blessed 'up to here' - and I wish I was taller! God is Good. ;)
Romaine Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 3:04 PM
Hey Paula, stopped by for a visit. This is a lovely poem and tribute to our Heavenly Father and the wonder of His Majesty. So beautifully written and expressed. Well done! Be Blessed, Neva
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