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The Dove Won'T Rest Until Peace Comes Home

The wings beat against the cage 
in an urgent frenzy tormented never defeated 
within this half twilight zone of slow crawling time held victim 

The allure of consequences nevertheless feeding the flames 
where conscious thought and lucid emotions die 
slowly singed away remains at the bottom rung 


The wisest transaction is the covenant never made and openly denied
decadence should never be answered once a pulls so strong
becomes injured with pride in alacrity's foretaste for knowledge

Where even the wind no longer breathes urgent 
madness with passions trait as the grand tempest storms 
steamily blows a cloud of smoke 

A haunting being hunts darkness pushing boundaries
towards cold unadorned blue abandoned 
holding the oceans spheres in restless silence 

Restrained darkness meets light but never crosses over 
the divide scratching at a spirit so forlorn
restraint comes naturally to the craggy and torn

Under the echoes of a lion's roar
A thousand tears can never mourn
the destruction and sad beauty that you have borne

Inside this isolation un-embellished 
Under an austere atmosphere
holds the wings of time imprisoned factors 

Destinies commander oh so damaged in this stunted wasteland of emotion's
conception becoming the unconsecrated norm in an un-heeding barrier 
where realisations stammer unknowingly into the humiliating wit of despair 

Which darkens the very soul blindfolded
The overture of the dove dances on as vigilant oracle of peace
the internal struggles of temperament challenges

Memorable moments within the spirit quest
fear and love wrapped up in a sorrowful wanting
yearning which hurts without choice

The pinnacles of reconciliation
and the fragile stirring of wings
wanting to fly is the verdict yet to come

a co written piece by Donna Loughman and Liam McDaid

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/15/2018 9:30:00 PM
I really love the way you write. So meaningful and beautifully descriptive. Bravo to you.
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Donna Loughman
Date: 2/16/2018 1:22:00 PM
Hi Shirley, thank you so much for your comment! It is greatly appreciated-:) Have a wonderful weekend!
Date: 12/5/2017 6:48:00 PM
Grand penmanship!!! Great piece. James
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Donna Loughman
Date: 12/5/2017 6:58:00 PM
James, Thank you so much for commenting! You have no idea how much it means to me! Writing with Liam is a true joy. Have a very blessed rest of the week. Thank you again, Donna
Date: 10/6/2017 3:12:00 PM
Hello Donna, Best Wishes to you and Liam on this marvelous, passionate, and quite powerful poetic collaboration!! The last Tercet is a perfect ending. Superb Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Donna Loughman
Date: 10/6/2017 5:34:00 PM
Gary, my thanks are wrapped up in a spirit of gratitude-:) Thank you so much for commenting! Have a wonderful weekend.....Donna
Date: 9/28/2017 4:05:00 PM
A powercul poem and great collaboration..
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Donna Loughman
Date: 9/28/2017 6:24:00 PM
Thank you! Your comment is much appreciated!
Date: 9/24/2017 6:18:00 PM
your pen sang through golden thank you for the pleasure in mixing ink with me donna i pray you have a blessed week
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Donna Loughman
Date: 9/24/2017 6:53:00 PM
Liam, thank you! It is always an honor to write with you. Have a blessed week as well!
Date: 9/21/2017 3:16:00 AM
- Powerfully written from you and Liam, deep and thought provoking poem - An excellent work, Donna and Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Donna Loughman
Date: 9/21/2017 11:59:00 AM
Thank you Ann-Lise! Your comment is greatly appreciated!

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