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Written for the contest "pick a title" sponsored by Edward Ibeh

Blue ~ is the door of uncertainty, carved with letters of lime green, with antique amulets hung on sterling strings, like teardrop dreamcatchers, framing the anatomy of healing heartbeats. And I am an aching epiphany~ an archived souvenir in rusted memories, wrapped in the ice-caged clutch of angst, soaked in shivering shimmers, wishing and praying~ love would blindfold my soul with jasmine hymns, lace my skin with lilac, as I still t r a c e your face amidst twilight iris, painting blurred visions with poetic tears ~ sprouting magnolia metaphors, phasing moon’s spellbound sagas, while pink is the nocturnal night-lamp, reflecting rosemary runes, too fragrant for the mirrors that breathe not beyond shallow floors, and feel not the halcyon heat of diamond drapes... O wallpaper wishes, embossed with glass wings of paradise, I long to soar beyond tethered thresholds, where guilt is a myth and darkness unlocks a meadow of romanticized memoirs. So unchain the heavy handles, closeting misery in seclusions, while dusk stretches through blackout veils of gold, stroking purple pillows bathed in unspoken sorrow. For in the corners of soundless confusion, I sing stars, weaving wild-petals on the tip of trembling truth, l o s t in the luminous light~ l u r k i n g and s w i r l i n g between soft sighs of the sun and velvety veins of swollen s i l e n c e.

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Date: 4/20/2025 8:11:00 AM
Love the ending, amazing writing, congratulations
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Date: 4/20/2025 5:44:00 AM
Sweet friend, back with Congratulations on your first place win. So proud to have shared the podium win with you.
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Date: 4/20/2025 3:45:00 AM
wordless me! Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 4/19/2025 11:06:00 AM
Inky, heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this spectacular poem with great vocabulary, metaphors, alliteration, and imagery. I absolutely love it!
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Date: 4/17/2025 4:25:00 AM
Expressive and descriptive lines you have penned for the contest. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Do you remember from years ago the song, "Behind The Green Door"? Sara K
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Date: 4/16/2025 11:36:00 AM
Such an exquisite poem, dearest Ink, on the intricacies of love, desire, and the collision of emotions like hope, sadness, and healing. The theme also dives into inner reflection, probing the intricacies of memory, desire, and the longing for connection in the face of mystery and sadness. The imagery of color (blue, green, pink) and natural elements (flowers, stars) emphasizes your sense of wonder. Your word choice in the poem is rich and evocative, with sensory details that paint vivid visions. Words like "uncertainty," "healing heartbeats," and "shimmering shimmers" add to the poem's emotional depth. The use of metaphors ("aching revelation," "magnolia metaphors") and similes ("like teardrop dreamcatchers") deepens the emotional trip. Furthermore, the poem uses personification, as evident in terms like "mirrors that breathe," to give life to inanimate objects, highlighting the emotional atmosphere.
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Date: 4/16/2025 4:19:00 AM
"And I am an aching epiphany~ an archived souvenir in rusted memories, wrapped in the ice-caged clutch of angst," How better can one picturize the inner anguish and melancholy. You are the Empress of pathos. Your poem is nothing short of excellent. How can I dare to participate in a contest when entries of this level are there! But I must console myself, each one's style is different. One cannot vie with another. I am sure Edward will love it. All the Best.
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Date: 4/15/2025 7:13:00 PM
Wow Inky!!! Your imagery is so clear, and I love how you space your words. Your formatting and language is on a level I cannot comprehend, but I am here for it!
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Date: 4/15/2025 12:03:00 PM
What a wonderful write you have here. I love how you did weaving of colors. "Good luck" Have a wonderful spring day and a Blessed Easter..........
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Date: 4/15/2025 9:21:00 AM
carved with letters of lime green, with antique amulets hung on sterling strings,By oh wow.. that imagery!!! lace my skin with lilac, as I still trace your face amidst twilight iris, mmmm the way u make the softness of nature bind with true love ..: absolutely stunning papi!! nocturnal night-lamp, reflecting rosemary runes, Ooo that is gorgeous!! guilt is a myth. Mmmm!!! and darkness unlocks a meadow of romanticized memoirs. Dayum!! This piece is an absolute masterpiece!!! Effortlessly flowing like a smoooth river
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Date: 4/15/2025 9:49:00 AM
Awn papi!!!! How sweet. Thank u always for visiting! :D
Date: 4/15/2025 7:33:00 AM
waw, your poetry is so "enticing" and nourishing for the heart and mind, thanks poet
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Date: 4/15/2025 9:45:00 AM
Thank you so very much for being always supportive, grateful truly
Date: 4/15/2025 7:33:00 AM
Ink, I don't think any of us can bodily soar, but your lines certainly do go "beyond tethered thresholds," along the warm rays of sunrise, all through the night until the moon sleeps in her bower on one of your petaled pillows. Willowy words, Ink.
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Date: 4/15/2025 9:45:00 AM
Your comment is as artistic and poetic as your soul dear linnersz, thank you so very much truly
Date: 4/15/2025 7:02:00 AM
while pink is the nocturnal night-lamp, reflecting rosemary runes… while dusk stretches through blackout veils of gold…swirling between soft sighs of the sun and velvety veins of swollen silence… My favorite lines! Hugs
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Date: 4/15/2025 9:44:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear Kim, for pointing out your favorite lines: appreciate it truly
Date: 4/15/2025 6:29:00 AM
Swollen silence ! Wow! Beautiful
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Date: 4/15/2025 9:41:00 AM
Awwn thank you dahlin

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