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The Door Of Uncertainty

I start my pilgrimage from unknown spheres. My paths are filled with penetrating spears. Clouds of helplessness and hopelessness float Seas are wave-filled, and I have no lifeboat. Faith points to the skies. Graves are seen around. Dead, though said to be saints, sleep without sound. Vultures and eagles search for flesh and bones. What else do I find besides rough, rude thorns? Should I stop yet? Aren't there new lands to find? With sharp hairpin curves, my ways seem to wind. I set off, though the trail I tread is shut. It's not here; somewhere far lies my lone hut.

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Date: 4/20/2025 10:17:00 PM
Our path is eternally strewn with thorns and thistles. We often are made to stop perplexed at a dead end. Yet we continue our journey, as if we are on a pilgrimage to lands far off. Beautiful poem with depth, lovely rhyming and great flow. Congratulations Chris on your well deserved win.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/20/2025 10:24:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 4/20/2025 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations, dear poet, for your win in this poetry contest with a skilfully crafted poem that takes the reader by surprise at the end. Wish you a forthcoming new week filled with light.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/20/2025 10:24:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 4/20/2025 8:22:00 AM
Excellent poem Christuraj, congratulations
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/20/2025 9:01:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 4/20/2025 3:56:00 AM
Lovely write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/20/2025 9:01:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 4/19/2025 12:41:00 PM
Christuraj, heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this superb poem. Awesome imagery. You really take the reader along for the ride!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/20/2025 9:01:00 AM
Thank you very much for giving me this opportunity. May God Bless You!
Date: 4/18/2025 9:42:00 AM
- An unknown fareful long journey ... great written, Christuraj - If it's for contest, I wish you good luck :) - hugs
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/18/2025 8:07:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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