The Doomsday Clock

It was two minutes until doomsday
and she struggled to finish her text.
it was an awkward time to break it off
but she couldn’t plunge into eternity
with her lover, still attached to her wrist.

And he waited patiently as he looked
at the clock, hoping for x’s and o’s,
deluded and hopelessly clueless.
when the bomb dropped,
they’d be engaged — for sure, he thought.

With edward-scissorhands, the minutes cut precariously
like darkened shadows upon a frozen tundra,
and the hour will strike like an asp,
the sting will melt the counterfeit humans.
one last cloud of dust, for angels to sweep
into the dustbin, after eternity is settled.

Two minutes before, politicians try to knock
each other out, shouting down the seconds,
with loud colors in dresses and ties, pretty hair
in permanent dye and handsomely slicked back.
they very much doubt the veracity of the doomsday note.

Only one human cries, tears falling upon a seed
that would never rise, a form that turned in her belly
with protruding arms and legs. she would lay hands
on him and love him with her palm until the clock struck

Midnight.  and Cinderella will never again lose
her glass slipper, no prince will anxiously search for her,
a pumpkin carriage will vanish without any inhabitants.

Two minutes, enough time to chew off fingernails,
to unwind your tattletail tongue, down shots,
drive yourself into a wall, to call your mother —
now that you have nothing to lose. humans

Before extinction, collaboratively can produce
many sins before they cut the earth’s crust loose

Countdown...starts...now


Emile Pinet’s Doomsday Clock Contest
2/4/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 2/28/2018 3:16:00 PM
Hate the subject matter, loved the work, congratulations Kim...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2018 10:02:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 2/27/2018 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations Kim, a great write :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thanks, Gary!
Date: 2/27/2018 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations Kim, there might be another contest soon, one minute to midnight. Perish the thought. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2018 8:52:00 AM
Eeks! You are too funny “perish the thought”!
Date: 2/26/2018 11:55:00 AM
You imaged the 'doomsday clock' countdown so well, Kim. Congrats on your fine placement in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2018 6:58:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra! Hugs...Kim
Date: 2/26/2018 10:28:00 AM
I like the imagery of Cinderella at midnight. Well done on your win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2018 6:58:00 AM
Thanks, Line! I grew up with classic fairy tales :)
Date: 2/5/2018 2:30:00 AM
Been reading up on this and it's frightening, I can remember the Cuban missile crisis but I was young so didn't bother me too much, We really need to live each day like its our last because things have got a lot more serious. Great verse Kim. Regards Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2018 6:44:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 2/4/2018 6:40:00 PM
Great poem Kim but read on. The doomsday clock: Its original setting in 1947 was seven minutes to midnight. It has been set backwards and forwards 22 times since then, the smallest-ever number of minutes to midnight being two (in 1953 and 2018) and the largest seventeen (in 1991). As of January 2018, the Clock is set at two minutes to midnight, due to global threat of nuclear war, the United States not being involved in world leadership roles, and climate change
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2018 7:04:00 PM
Interesting
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