The Dolphin Bird

Meandering with my imagination, I felt it flowing, silver like a fish. This fish grew wings, and with great elation, I caught a ride on it! It was my wish to fly beyond the clouds. Where would we go? The fish became a dolphin bird! He dipped behind a hill to touch dawn’s orange glow, then swooped, and like a pancake, I was flipped, free falling, till he caught me in the sky! Onto this dolphin bird’s smooth skin I clung. His wings sun-lit, were gleaming. I could fly as whistle sounds to me were being sung! My strange winged creature clicked a joyful tune when soaring into night, we found the moon! Originally entitled "Imagination" for the Dolphin Poetry Contest of Julie Leigh Rodeheaver
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Roper Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 10:28 PM
Back with congratulations on your win .. Hugs Eve
Sergi Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 1:34 PM
A beautiful poem that also piqued my imagination. my compliments, Andrea!
Gauthier Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:48 AM
A delightful whimsical poem. Conngrats on your well deserved win, Andrea.
Cunningham Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 1:28 AM
Congratulations Andrea. Tom
Roper Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 3:25 PM
Andrea, I love your fairy tale ride I felt like i was soaring in the sky :) Thank you so very much for participating in my Sonnet contest Hugs Eve
Wolf Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 9:30 PM
And you do have a great imagination at that! A great win, Andrea. Well done.
Allison Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 7:06 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Kroll Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 8:56 AM
I love the image of flying. There's such a sense of freedom. Congrats on your well deserved win, Andrea!
A   Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 1:39 AM
Andrea, ha, LOVE IT, Congratulations on your sweet win. Thank you so much for the support. Stop by my blog "CERTIFYING OLD AGE (and a baby)" if you'd like. Always & Forever..... LINDA
Arnone Avatar
April 22, 2016 at 11:06 AM
You paint picture words, Andrea. :-)
Dalei Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 1:06 AM
Very nice imagery & beautiful ending. I enjoyed....hugs
James Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 9:46 AM
Love your work!
Zozulya Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 6:00 AM
Wow! Very nice!
Hicks Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 12:52 AM
A much more elegant rendition of the Mother Goose Rhyme, the cow jumped over the moon! I have difficulty imagining what a "dolphin-bird" might look like, but it's enjoyable to go a little nutty, now and then. You hide your rhymes really well ... I didn't even realize I was reading a sonnet.
A   Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 1:33 AM
Andrea, you should have written about Unicorns. LOL, then maybe then you would have placed first. LOL.. Kidding, your poem rocks. your imagination is like no other. Congratulations on your fantastic win. Love LINDA
Godwin Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Me and my imagination wish we had not missed the imagination contest. I enjoyed your freedom flight which is loaded with creative imagination and delightful sensations ... CayCay
Mcclain Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 6:54 PM
Very nice, very enchanting. "Dolphin bird" is a wonderfully evocative image. It takes skill to write a structured sonnet and yet still convey such a sense of freedom.
Beaufort Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 6:44 PM
There is nothing quite like being able to fly. You have the wings to do it. May I be nothing but celebratory for you!!!! You are a high flyer!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 2:14 PM
You did great in this contest Andrea. Congratulations on your top placement. I was happy to have made the list because I didn't give her exactly what she was asking for, so I am a happy camper. Cheers, Connie
Kimathi Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 7:46 AM
Hi Andrea. Congrats for your #2 placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Nehls Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 5:02 PM
Hi Andrea. How are you my friend. I hope all is well with you. Quite a fun ride on imaginations wings that you have invited us on. I had to smile at this one. Sometimes it just feels good to write a poem like this and it was a joy to read. Have a beautiful day, my friend.... Robert.
A  Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 3:24 PM
Hi Andrea, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
Anish Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 9:35 PM
Sweet fantasy here! Imagination can lead to joy! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Laurie Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 5:40 PM
G'day Andrea ... you are a star with your sonnets - just great - Lindsay
Haight Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 11:10 AM
Nice imagery of flight in your imagination poem, Andrea. Congratulation on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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