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Depression is expression extinguished It doesn't question and it doesn't distinguish Through its progression hope is relinquished For the "Depression is...a short poem" contest 12-4-2016

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Date: 12/17/2016 2:25:00 AM
Extinguish, not distinguish and relinquish. Great. Congratulations, Kai
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Date: 12/9/2016 8:57:00 PM
cool use of rhyme in it!! Congrats.
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Date: 12/9/2016 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win very well written Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/9/2016 7:15:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Trey. I like how you used rhyme in your short poem.
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Date: 12/9/2016 3:11:00 AM
Hi Trey, Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/9/2016 12:27:00 AM
Expression extinguished. I love your short poem, the rhyme, the all really. Congratulations!
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Trey Hamner
Date: 12/9/2016 12:42:00 AM
Thank you very much, Darren.
Date: 12/7/2016 2:38:00 PM
True summation Trey! Great capture of 3-Line use. Well done. Hugggs, Cap'n Deb
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Trey Hamner
Date: 12/7/2016 4:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Deborah.