Trey Hamner Poet Free verse

The Doldrums

Depression is expression extinguished
It doesn't question and it doesn't distinguish
Through its progression hope is relinquished


For the "Depression is...a short poem" contest
12-4-2016

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Kai Michael Neumann December 17, 2016 at 2:25 AM Extinguish, not distinguish and relinquish. Great. Congratulations, Kai

Andrea Dietrich December 9, 2016 at 8:57 PM cool use of rhyme in it!! Congrats.

Eve Roper December 9, 2016 at 9:11 AM Congratulations on your win very well written Hugs Eve

Agnes Krampe December 9, 2016 at 7:15 AM Congrats on your win, Trey. I like how you used rhyme in your short poem.

Alexis Y. December 9, 2016 at 3:11 AM Hi Trey, Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Darren White December 9, 2016 at 12:27 AM Expression extinguished. I love your short poem, the rhyme, the all really. Congratulations! Trey Hamner December 9, 2016 at 12:42 AM Thank you very much, Darren.

Deborah Burch December 7, 2016 at 2:38 PM True summation Trey! Great capture of 3-Line use. Well done. Hugggs, Cap'n Deb Trey Hamner December 7, 2016 at 4:00 PM Thank you very much, Deborah.