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The Doldrums

Depression is expression extinguished It doesn't question and it doesn't distinguish Through its progression hope is relinquished For the "Depression is...a short poem" contest 12-4-2016

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/17/2016 2:25:00 AM

Extinguish, not distinguish and relinquish. Great. Congratulations, Kai

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2016 8:57:00 PM

cool use of rhyme in it!! Congrats.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/9/2016 9:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your win very well written Hugs Eve

Agnes Krampe

Date: 12/9/2016 7:15:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Trey. I like how you used rhyme in your short poem.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/9/2016 3:11:00 AM

Hi Trey, Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Darren White

Date: 12/9/2016 12:27:00 AM

Expression extinguished. I love your short poem, the rhyme, the all really. Congratulations!

Trey Hamner
Date: 12/9/2016 12:42:00 AM

Thank you very much, Darren.

Deborah Burch

Date: 12/7/2016 2:38:00 PM

True summation Trey! Great capture of 3-Line use. Well done. Hugggs, Cap'n Deb

Trey Hamner
Date: 12/7/2016 4:00:00 PM

Thank you very much, Deborah.