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the dog warns me

the dog does bark warns in dark night quick fright shark splash

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Date: 1/2/2019 6:14:00 PM
Lively last line, makes me want more!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/3/2019 12:10:00 AM
I guess I could expand on it. But today? Hmmmmm pondering this idea Michelle.
Date: 1/2/2019 5:00:00 PM
Ooh, poor dog! Life's circle can be cruel.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/3/2019 12:10:00 AM
It really can!
Date: 1/2/2019 4:25:00 AM
its dog's awareness of its master//nice than-bauk poem
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/2/2019 10:40:00 AM
Also I believe maybe my first or second try at a than-bauk. I am actively expanding my horizons here.