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The Dog Returns

a boy walks the dog he jerks at the strings with force — the yoyo returns 8/2/2018

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Date: 8/3/2018 11:46:00 AM
:) Some of those modern dog-walking chains do have a mechanism that pulls the pup back. Such a delightful haiku, Kim! Love, Carolyn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2018 7:14:00 PM
Thanks, Carolyn!
Date: 8/3/2018 3:09:00 AM
Haha! Witty dear, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2018 7:27:00 AM
Thanks, Demetrios!
Date: 8/2/2018 4:20:00 PM
Clever one Kim x
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2018 7:27:00 AM
Thanks, Kevin!
Date: 8/2/2018 4:17:00 PM
haha, that really grabbed me, calling the dog a yo yo!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2018 7:28:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed!

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