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The Distance Within

I run the miles deep within, a subdued race, an unspoken intent, devoid of spectators-- no finish line, just breath and heart, both entwined. The shades lengthen along my path but still a soft dawn finds its way turning into gray. Stage by stage a tale, flaw, and goal, rushing, steady flow. The road stretches far, but I endure— a counterfeit concealed, strong and pure. through storms that howl, nights that weep, I keep the pace, I am awake. With each mile that challenges my thoughts, I find a surprising wellspring of strength. not in the roar or triumphant-- but in the stillness, I transformed! A marathoner not of feet, but of the unflinching heartbeat, so when the world drifts apart, I run the internal reach.

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Date: 8/12/2025 8:37:00 PM
As a lifetime runner and coach of Track & Field, I love your choice of metaphor, Rowena. The poem has a nice rhythm to it. Sara and I ran the Dallas Whiterock Marathon together in 1991. It was in December, 35 degree and wind chill of 10-15 degrees. I think our hearts stop beating at times from the cold. LOL we made it though, as we knew we would with God's help. Your poem on the marathon of life is just as hard, with greater benefits. Blessings my friend, Bill
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Date: 8/11/2025 8:00:00 PM
a thoughtful poem, hmm, i guess our lives could all be thought of as marathons. I like the lines, "A marathoner not of feet, but of the unflinching heartbeat"
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Date: 8/11/2025 7:27:00 AM
That is the only way to win in any race through the internal workings of mind and body. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Way to go. Sara K
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/11/2025 6:06:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Sara!
Date: 8/11/2025 7:23:00 AM
a lovely poem with empowering attributes ~
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/11/2025 6:04:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 8/11/2025 2:58:00 AM
Revealing the quiet power that dwells within, steadfast and resolute. Well spoken, Rowena.
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/11/2025 6:04:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 8/11/2025 1:23:00 AM
Expressing inner strength and fortitude. Nicely espoused, Rowena. :) john
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/11/2025 1:46:00 AM
Thank you, John! I really appreciate your kind words. Staying strong inside is a journey we all share. :)

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