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How all the children loved their last teacher. First day her feast. Could not clap and give gifts. For there now was someone they did not know. A brand new teacher had arrived for school. 8 February 2021 Double Tetractys 7 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper Picture No 2 Placed 1

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Valsa George

Date: 3/28/2022 5:15:00 AM

A totally new form for me ! But you did so well ! Though late, my congratulations on your deserving win, Victor !

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/1/2021 8:01:00 AM

Congratulations on the win Victor! Linda

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/1/2021 6:59:00 AM

Hi Victor, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Beata Agustin

Date: 3/1/2021 12:45:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! God bless you.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/28/2021 10:52:00 PM

Victor, thank you for creating and entering my contest. I like that you made me see this picture in a different view. Do visit my Double Tetractys 7 blog. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/10/2021 7:10:00 AM

- I remember it was exciting with a new teacher ... great done for the contest, Victor - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/9/2021 1:45:00 AM

Takes one back to sitting in class feeling the apprehension of getting a new teacher. Your words fit the picture so well Victor ~~ Belle

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/8/2021 10:10:00 PM

Great poetry, Victor. How many children would have witness a scene like this.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/8/2021 9:30:00 PM

The children are always shocked when this happens; for they almost always love their teacher. Great scenario for this Double Tetractys, Victor.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/8/2021 6:59:00 PM

So touching and relatable, Victor. It takes me to memory lane. :=) Best wishes for the contest

Judy Ball

Date: 2/8/2021 4:54:00 PM

Ah yes the fear and uncertainty of welcoming a new teacher. What kind of person is he/she. What kind of teacher is he/she. Well done. God Bless my friend. JB

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 2/8/2021 3:54:00 PM

Excellent write, Victor. Love it. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2021 2:07:00 PM

oh this is so interesting how you saw it in a totally different way. WELL DONE!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/8/2021 6:35:00 AM

Kids get attached to the teacher--you captured their reaction well, Victor, when they face someone new. I know you will win.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 2/8/2021 6:30:00 AM

This is done with perfection. All lines same length. Reminded me of school days, new teacher always uncomfortable. Take care Rama

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/8/2021 6:07:00 AM

Ahh!! Won't that be awesome to have a surprise birthday party the first day of a new teacher's being there. Reads like a winner to me. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/8/2021 4:33:00 AM

Hi Victor, You have penned a good interpretation of the photo. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/8/2021 4:12:00 AM

A twist on this Norman Rockwell painting. That would be so sad for the class that meant to surprise their known teacher.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/8/2021 1:32:00 AM

That brought back memories Victor, always that dread, what would they be like.? Good luck in the contest. Tom