The Disappearing Self

On plateau, the view is everywhere,
and makes the body stretch to meet it.
Something calls, beyond the railroad
far away, beyond the storm clouds over there.
And in its shy defining, there is restlessness.
The earth is waiting for reply,
and that unspoken; words are blasphemy.
The towering sky embraced is that assent
to journeying.  The rich embodiment
of shadow worlds becomes the chariot.
Identity cuts loose, the mind aflight
mounts higher on the stair of consciousness.

Something stirs where sense transcended
molds itself around awakening, 
arresting doubt, and recreates reality.
The appetite is gone, the interchange
of science left behind, and time is meaningless.
That which remains is of a new creation,
whirling as the nebulae, but infinite
beyond that which an "I" might probe,
for that has faded too.

The reach is far away, into awareness
quite beyond enlightenment,
quite beyond the power of being
whether man or God to bless
or to ordain.  It rides upon my breath,
upon the mystery that waits
just past the will—indeed it is that I,
though bound in wonderment,
am nowhere to be found, 
and lost within an ecstasy
I'll never understand.
                   ~
(as always,  severe critiques are invited, encouraged, and appreciated)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Falotico Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 9:43 AM
Another deep piece from your soul n mind. Your work is original and inspiring. Ps what word would u change in "When the glass is empty"??
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November 12, 2012 at 9:59 AM
The first one: "Your" in this case meant "you are"....which of course is "You're"
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