Premiere Contest WinnerThe Digger's Children

I paced between the old and new
along the rows where gray stones grow,
so careful not to tread upon
the freshly filled and seeded few.
Soft shadows slid across the lawn
where long ago a scythe would mow;
its ringing echoed down the row
like angels voices singing now,
a prayer of faith, a sacred vow.
While young men die in foreign fields,
when once they played with cardboard shields -
now dig, like I, an endless trench,
a hole where mud and blood would drench;
the devil's own unholy stench.
Today my labors dig like they,
yet here, a grave where mourners pray
as chapel bells ring hymns of peace;
a futile wish for hate to cease.
The soil is scarred across the world,
with trench and grave, more holes to fill,
while there, on high, a tempest swirled.
It all will heal...it is his will.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ashley Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 9:04 PM
Dear Craig, your highly refined poetic skills and passionate artistry combine to create a potent poem of contrasts that stirs one soulfully, viscerally and intellectually. I took note of the interesting rhyme scheme adorning your impeccable iambic meter and I was especially struck by this imagery "While young men die in foreign fields,/when once they played with cardboard shields" - this made my heart ache... Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. A fav! Exceptional! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 9:27 AM
Congratulations, Craig. You are doing great in the marathon. This is one with a great universal theme. I like that it's rhymed!
Toney Avatar
August 8, 2025 at 12:15 PM
Craig, congratulations on your second-place win on Mile 4 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Your poem displays a deep reverence for lives lost due to hate, with a hope for the future. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 5 has already started.
Cornish Avatar
August 8, 2025 at 1:40 PM
Thanks so much Mark!
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 7:20 PM
Hello Craig Cornish, a graveyard digger's job is hard and lonely in the grave yard. Have a nice day my friend.
Roper Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 9:25 PM
Wow! Great write, Craig, congratulations on your win very well deserved.
Hamilton Avatar
January 31, 2020 at 1:06 PM
A powerfully potent write Craig, full of deep meaning and truth, congrats on your win, very worthy!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 31, 2020 at 5:44 AM
I instantly recognised harry's influence in this masterpiece Craig x
Krutsinger Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 5:45 AM
I feel this way too " futile wish for hate to cease." - but then again I think, maybe we can help it one person at a time. Nicely done Craig.
Rockwell Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 3:42 PM
Wonderful write! Congrats!
Cornish Avatar
January 31, 2020 at 2:01 PM
Thank you Cindi
Scars Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 8:21 AM
Wow! Worthy of a top win dear Craig. You are amazing at IP and IT. . Congrats! X:-)
Cornish Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 8:57 AM
Thank you Lu Loo!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 7:48 PM
This is excellent Craig. Congratulations on winning the Trophy! xxoo
Cornish Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 8:58 AM
Thanks much Connie
Adams Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 6:21 PM
see, i knew this one was an amazing write...it looks even better with that gold cup beside it... congratulations Craig! :)
Cornish Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 8:59 AM
Thanks Dear Sandy
Bordner Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 5:52 PM
I equate the growing grey stones to the indelible imprint blooming into earthly eternity that these young peoples' legacy affords...this poetry is strong and wise Craig...J.A.B.
Cornish Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 9:00 AM
Thank you Justin
Watt Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 3:20 PM
Craig, I nominate you for Poet Laureate. An awesome piece, in every way - a fave. Best wishes ~ John
Cornish Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 9:03 AM
Way too kind John, but we all share that honor, too many fine poets here
Turner Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 1:35 PM
Exceptional poetry, Craig.
Cornish Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 9:04 AM
Thanks Daniel and for Georgie as well
Watson Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 1:33 PM
I am reading this on the 75th anniversary of the liberation of Auschwitz and so an already powerful and thought-provoking poem has even greater poignancy and dimension. This is an exceptional contribution to the site and congratulations on your high placement,Craig.
Cornish Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 8:56 AM
One of the saddest times in history Wendy and thank you
Horsman Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 11:49 PM
If this is for SOS contest, a wonderful entry, love the 'foreign fields' 'cardboard shields' In fact it is this kind of poetry, that drew me to the art, in the first place..You write it so well, to my fav...
Cornish Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 8:55 AM
Thank you Harry and for your inspiration
Lamoureux Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 10:13 AM
A sad reality well expressed.
Cornish Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 8:50 AM
Thanks Richard
Adams Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 9:54 AM
wow... this is powerful, chilling, but so well penned ... you are so good at these meters, this just flows with such ease... Bravo Craig... excellent write! :) hugs
Cornish Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 10:00 AM
Honored Sandy, thank you!
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