The Diet

His mind is heavy
the body just lingers on and on,
with eyes that pierce the darkness
he crouches menacingly,
lower and lower he sinks 
his knees accept the floor.
He checks out the mirror
cannot believe he’s in there,
this fuel that is needed
is it for self indulgence?
While everyone still thinks he cares.
His mind creates the succulence
the body takes the strain,
his illness now known to be fatal
it’s on T.V everyday,
blindly he stumbles
someone left out a chair,
he craves for compensation
knowing he’s almost there,
his hand does tremble
his grip beyond doubt,
a sharp pull upon the magnetic door
gives him a shout,
the light is excruciating
brilliant and bright,
fried chicken looks so lovely
plump and. Oh! Just right.

© Harry J Horsman  1993
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Allison Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 2:36 AM
I love the twist at the end Harry congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
A. Sharma Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 1:24 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win harry with this fabulous write!
A  Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 12:27 AM
Harry, Congratulations on your win, I was amazed by all poem. Forever **SKAT**
Wesley Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 8:18 PM
The title and last line are great together Harry - your sense of humor is too much. Enjoyed this fattening addiction.
Durbin Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 2:40 PM
It's hard to resist our favorite foods, no matter the consequences.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 4:44 AM
thankxx Harry for your warm and always welcome comments on my contest entry luv.. hoping u had a marvelous weekend full of creative poetry ... pleasant week my friend..so wonderful u are luv..
Song Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 7:25 PM
Harry, Is his hand trembling from low blood sugar? ha ha. You had me at-with eyes that piece the darkness. Great win and delicious creativity! Gwendolen
George   Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 9:47 AM
Had me fooled to the last line. Great writing, Harry. lainie
Horne Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 8:18 AM
Congratulations on your win : ) Jack
Devonshire Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 7:33 AM
This is quite the "maverick" poem, Harry. Enjoyed reading it a second time and still laughed when I got to the fried chicken. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 7:26 AM
Congratulations Harry on your win in the "Maverick Free Verse" contest sponsored by John Moses Freeman. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 4:31 AM
Super congrats for this lovely write dear friend.
Puddifoot Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 4:03 AM
congrats on your winning poem, this held my attention right through to the unexpected end!
Onclaud Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 3:24 AM
you so funny, harry!! best CHEERS for the hefty win! :) huggs. nette
Heckman Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 9:32 PM
This poem really draws you into it slowly and in an ethereal way like you could feel the air
Johnson Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 8:52 PM
Very clever write. Congratulations on your win. A surprising ending caught me unawares. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 8:37 PM
Major congrats Harry on your fantastic well deserved win in the Maverick Free Verse contest my friend.. knew this one would top the charts luv.. enjoy ...
Mehta Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 6:20 PM
Congratulastions on the seventh place win in the contest of John, harry
Freeman Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 6:10 PM
So great to see you in the winning circle Harry. Congratulations on your worthy poem's seventh place win. Agape, Moses
Onclaud Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 12:36 PM
lol, harry... when it comes to diet and weight.. i plead the fifth amendment! a feast( oops) for the poetic heart; gorgeous piece! :) huggs, nette
Neels Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 12:27 PM
Harry, you had me going with this one hehe, didn't expect that ending.. loads of smiles tonight, thanks a mill, love Wilma
Horne Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 8:05 AM
LOL - I've just looked down at my beer belly...and shrugged!
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 3:15 PM
Harry, this was fun to read, but I am so depressed bout my own weight right now, I almost want to cry. haha. LUv, Andrea
Peranteau Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 2:44 PM
Awesome poem dear poet...yet; this soul has empty desires for diet ! *smiles*...in fact; I can use the pounds those wanting to shed so desperately ! lol Great write Sir ! have a great eve ! much love, james
Sweetheart Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 5:13 AM
Great feelings and emotions of those trying to maintain a diet and their challenge each day and night to resist that magnetic door luv.. it is an ongoing desire this dieting thing.. a sweet read for those who deal with this struggle.. once was my own too..but now am where I want to be.. u might enjoy reading my "Diet Diva" poem.. at least have a laugh luv..
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