The Devil You Know

Whatever happened to common sense
when did we all become so dense
ya can’t fall off an un-sat fence

dreaming of why and where and whence
trying to figure out farthings and pence
trapped in a world of hereafter and hence

can’t really recall but it’s been that way since
we o’erthrew the king to favor the prince
expecting pure satin – wound up with cheap chintz

our armor now rusted, bloodless, with dents
thrown out of our houses we now live in tents
downwind from the castle’s hungerless scents

venom the substance of our effluence
fueled by delay of our just recompense
and for our actions offer no penitence

our fields long gone fallow wait in suspense
for the word of a dead king “let planting commence”
a king raised to power at our expense


John G. Lawless
©12/13/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Watt Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 2:19 PM
John, I loved the lines "we o’erthrew the king to favor the prince expecting pure satin – wound up with cheap chintz". We always expect the next regime to be a vast improvement over the last. Great writing.
Wolf Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 8:10 PM
My, but haven't you written the history of man -- wallowing in familiar futility -- in a mere 24 lines!! Bravo, John.
Lawless Avatar
December 17, 2021 at 9:11 AM
BUT WAIT......COMING SOON....."THE HISTORY OF MAN" PART II
Mcintosh Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 7:19 AM
Wow. Incredibly brilliant writing. Enjoyed and hope our prayers reach the One who is truly in control of it all... He can make everything as it should be. God bless you. Love, Gina
Awtry Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 12:26 PM
enjoyed this sophisticated rhyme. This is how I feel about the "fat cats" in Washington--our ruling class. While they have us bickering about democrat and republican, they hob nob and exchange investment strategies, and make deals with foreign governments. Same old story of power corrupting...
Lawless Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 7:01 AM
ABSOLUTELY!!!!!!!!!
Hankins Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 9:00 AM
John, very fine monorhyme! I'm sure it's a metaphor, but I'm still trying to unravel all of its meanings. Interesting story on face value, however.
Lawless Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 6:57 AM
It is a metaphoric traipse through history's repetitive upheavals...and their tormenting sameness
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