The Devil Danced At Midnight

THE DEVIL DANCED AT MIDNIGHT

The devil danced at midnight
beneath a waning moon
with his minions before him,
twas a sight to make one swoon.
He pranced in jubilation,
then capered with a shout,
his arms flailed like a windmill
as his legions danced about.

He cursed the God of heaven,
the demon horde gave tongue.
He vowed to steal each mortal soul,  
every single one.
But first a plan was needed
to carry out the deed,
some way to blind humanity
so no danger was perceived.

"Our appearance must be winsome,
our ways seem as a lark,
we mustn't ever let them know
our agenda is so dark."
"Let's make for them a holiday,
the best they've ever seen,
we'll give it to their children
and we'll call it Halloween."

"They'll dress as little goblins,
as pirates and as ghouls,
they'll have parties in their churches
and one at every school."
"They'll beg adults for candy
while they roam from street to street,
dressed as little monsters
as they shout out trick or treat."

"How can there be real devils
if it's just a game they play,
no one will believe in us,
that's how we'll win the day."
"We'll confuse these hapless mortals,
in God they'll have their doubts,
they'll all be dead and buried
ere they know what we're about."
"And if they die in mortal sin
well then my friends we've won,
they'll spend eternity with us,
every single one."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 2/24/2023 6:14:00 PM
Such a well-written poem. Very entertaining. My favorite lines are, "And if they die in mortal sin well then my friends we've won, they'll spend eternity with us, every single one."
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J. Summers
Date: 2/25/2023 7:10:00 AM
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. much appreciated. John
Date: 3/31/2021 7:24:00 PM
Your poem is a compelling drama, John. It could be simply read as a wildly imaginative Halloween poem - but - it seems to me it could be more.. it could be a deeper metaphor for the dark forces at play today in the hapless political realm. Either way, it is excellent and intriguing story-telling poetry, my gifted friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/1/2021 7:44:00 AM
John, your poetic pen is potent yet masterfully understated which enhances its thought-provoking quality. I would say you achieved your storytelling goal with sublime subtlety and brilliance. This has to be a fav, dear poet..
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J. Summers
Date: 4/1/2021 7:30:00 AM
You get it. I'm so pleased. I didn't want to be preachy about it so I went with a more subtle approach. Thanks so much for the read and your ability to look deeper. John
Date: 3/7/2021 7:28:00 AM
Wow, you had me from start to finish.
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J. Summers
Date: 3/8/2021 1:31:00 PM
Thanks Richard. Glad you liked it. John
Date: 1/22/2021 9:43:00 AM
Great Halloween poem J, enjoyed your well written story, Emilia : )
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J. Summers
Date: 1/22/2021 1:35:00 PM
Thanks Emilia for reading and commenting. So glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 1/9/2021 7:57:00 PM
Wow -superbly penned ~ a FAVE for me
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J. Summers
Date: 1/10/2021 9:24:00 PM
One of my favorites too, glad you liked it.
Date: 12/7/2020 11:46:00 AM
Brilliant poem.my favourite. Take care.simon:)
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J. Summers
Date: 12/8/2020 1:24:00 PM
Glad you liked it Simon. Thanks for reading.
Date: 11/4/2020 5:56:00 PM
A stupendous write for Halloween, I’m in awe of how you’ve put this together, truly amazing... Belle
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J. Summers
Date: 11/5/2020 9:15:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words. Glad you liked it.
Date: 10/28/2020 10:11:00 AM
Another great poem. It was easy to visualize what you were describing.
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J. Summers
Date: 10/29/2020 8:32:00 AM
Thanks for coming back Jolynn. Glad you liked it.
Date: 10/27/2020 8:58:00 AM
Great story telling.. I enjoyed the flow to the poem..
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J. Summers
Date: 10/29/2020 8:33:00 AM
Thanks for reading.
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