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The Desert

Silent sagebrush glare at the sun's burning eye, while piles of hued sand gather at the ancient mountain's feet. A river of pavement melts into the twisting landscape, covering nature's floor with a man made sheet. The wailing wind glides between woven branches of stern trees standing guard over fragile soil. Monuments of eroded rocks salute the changing sky, their forms surrendering to the weather's endless toil. Moisture's touch evaporates in the desert's blistering heat, frying any wandering human's unprotected face. Nature paints this dry beauty with flaming brushes, wrapping a parched land in a sunset's crimson lace.

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Date: 7/7/2013 10:20:00 AM
Angie A great Free -for-all winning poem. *CONGRATULATIONS!!! With your awesome winning write. have a great day, TA TA TA * Linda
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Date: 7/4/2013 12:00:00 AM
very nice........... skat
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Date: 7/3/2013 7:05:00 PM
Angie I truly love how you painted this desert scene. Congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/7/2013 11:09:00 AM
Angie~Yours truly *SKAT
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Date: 3/1/2013 8:56:00 PM
Hi Angie, thank you very much for considering my contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD
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Date: 12/23/2009 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the PoetrySoup Site October Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Angie. May 2010 be the year you see your writing endeavors become reality. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:53:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 2:15:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Angie! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:19:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/15/2009 5:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 12/15/2009 12:31:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured on the Soup this week >> James
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Date: 12/15/2009 9:07:00 AM
congratulations on your poem being featured and a wonderful poem it is
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Date: 12/15/2009 2:11:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserving honor. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 12/14/2009 5:45:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and rhyme to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 12/14/2009 11:11:00 AM
Many congrats on being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/14/2009 8:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured at PoetrySoup this week Angie. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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Date: 12/14/2009 5:01:00 AM
congrats on being featured this week
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