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The Depth (Inspired By Cesar Cantu)

. how far down... for once too far and light growing ........(*no closer*)........ -panic sets into brains- grasping at throats to sustain ...the thought of air seeping from lungs (like a pin hole in a balloon) greenish blue liquid [[[[[[crushing]]]]]] [[[[[pushing]]]]] D O W N O N I N T E L L E C T U A L Beings eyes gouging themselves out POPPING from the skull in .......terror....... @.@ life two inches from being stolen and yet the sun and yet the sun and yet the sun (O) plays tricks on the fragility of minds thinking that we are so so very very far ......away when the sweetness of polluted air is just one touch away the water {{{{{rippels}}}}} ((((((rippels))))))) FaLliNG

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Date: 12/2/2009 7:13:00 PM
Innovative!!! love it. :)
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Date: 10/27/2009 9:08:00 PM
@.@ now that's something sensational...I mean, really sensational, using the whole context of the word, it produces sensations, feelings of depth, slow-mo grativational law, density...and the structure of it, of course, contributes to the whole. Thanks a lot for the experience =D
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Date: 10/23/2009 1:55:00 PM
I've never seen anything like this, Rain. It's fascinating... Your Love, .::James::.
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Date: 10/20/2009 7:59:00 AM
WOW !!! Thank you for presenting your wonderful poetry to us today. It was an enjoyable read for me. Thank you Rain. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/19/2009 11:32:00 AM
Interesting design and thoughts. Keep writing. Sara
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