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The Dental Visit

In the middle of the room stood the white metal chair
   Designed to deliver the best dental care,
But she stood there immobile, unable to move 
   Toward the object of torture that was likely to prove
To be frightful, exhausting and life threatening too,
   As the hygienist invaded her body anew.

“Let me help you.” The voice said as a hand touched her arm and
   Guided her forward with arising alarm 
To that monster before her with a history of pain
   She had sworn to avoid and see never again.

As she sat there she knew that her pulse was increasing
   While weakness expanded with blood pressure decreasing.
Her breathing grew shallow and her skin felt much colder 
   When a masculine hand firmly pressed on her shoulder.

“It’s alright.” Said the voice from behind the white mask.
   “I’ll be gentle as this cleaning is a most simple task.”
But the eyes were uncaring, the brows dark with gloom
   Providing no comfort in the sanitized room.

Large fingers penetrate as her jaw opens wide
   For the scraping and picking to go on inside 
With a speed and a hurry and a schedule to meet,
   The hygienist leans forward while still on his seat

The pain in her jaw hit so quick and severe
   And her groan brought no comfort, only increased her fear
As rough hands did their duty and worked on her teeth
   Caring nothing for feelings that lay underneath.

She could hear heavy breathing as he plied with his skill 
   For to finish more quickly and to give her the bill.
She could do nothing else as she sat there afraid, 
   So she folded her hands while she silently prayed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/27/2016 7:03:00 PM
I took my elderly mum to the dentist today ... she wanted me to go in the room when she has her treatment ....errr no way!!! Great descriptive write Gerald:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/12/2016 12:34:00 AM
Gerald Greene, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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