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As I watch Autumn’s grin when summer dies, accepting seasons change for a reason, I’m captivated by our glorious skies, which enthrall whatever the season. Accepting seasons change for a reason stunning sunsets, clouds tinged with gold; which enthrall whatever the season nature’s wondrous glory to behold. Stunning sunsets, clouds tinged with gold; I’m captivated by our glorious skies, Natures wondrous glory to behold, as I watch Autumn’s grin when summer dies. Poet’s October Pantoum Contest Sponsored by William Kekula 10/6/19

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Date: 10/23/2019 12:12:00 AM
I wish you all the luck with this one that is definitely a FAVE for me. I also like descending the stairs limerick which I was sure would place to my disappointment. Congrats with that one anyhow.
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Date: 10/23/2019 6:10:00 PM
thanks so much Janis I use the contest prompts to inspire me to write, a win is an added bonus:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/7/2019 3:33:00 PM
Nice penning Jan, indeed autumn pushes persistently summer into hibernation. Hope things good with you, on holiday in Scottish highlands this week enjoying peaceful break, Gordon
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Date: 10/10/2019 6:05:00 AM
Yes autmn has arrived in all her glory, enjoy your break, we too are on holiday:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 10/7/2019 6:52:00 AM
All so lovely! Your poetry lips are golden, sweet Jan!
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Date: 10/10/2019 6:04:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I do enjoy the challenge of the form:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/7/2019 2:24:00 AM
Not my favorite form, wrote one never again, you've done a great job Jan. Feeling it more since getting back. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 10/7/2019 4:46:00 AM
I love the form Tom it's not so challenging to me now :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/6/2019 8:25:00 PM
You did wonderfully with the form, Jan. I need to get going on this one!! How are you doing?? Natalyn did some new poems. She is really getting into it here!
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Date: 10/7/2019 4:45:00 AM
I love this form especiallytrying together to rhyme and make sense when the line order is swapped all good with me,will drop by and read natalyn:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/6/2019 5:04:00 PM
A crisp autumn day here Jan...bunch of my mates are over your way tearing up London and tottenham hotspur stadium...hope they don't have to ring you for bail money lol
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Date: 10/7/2019 4:44:00 AM
Lol they would be better ringing my son he lives there lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/6/2019 5:04:00 PM
"as I watch Autumn’s grin when summer dies." I like this line...
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Date: 10/7/2019 4:43:00 AM
Thanks Arturo that's my favourite line too:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/6/2019 4:29:00 PM
beautifully done, jan! best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 10/6/2019 4:52:00 PM
Thanks ilene:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/6/2019 4:09:00 PM
Thank you for your poetic reminder about the beauty of the skies,Jan. We look up too seldom these days! Is the autumn grin that of the pumpkin?!
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Date: 10/6/2019 4:53:00 PM
Today I saw a Halloween display even though it's weeks before the actual event and that inspired autumns grin:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/6/2019 1:48:00 PM
- Beautiful (and a little sad), Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/6/2019 3:25:00 PM
Thanks anne-lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/6/2019 1:31:00 PM
Love it! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 10/6/2019 3:25:00 PM
Thanks Rico:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/6/2019 11:33:00 AM
Excellent Pantoum Jan! Well done :)
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Date: 10/6/2019 3:24:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, I love the challenge of the form:-) hugs Jan xx