The Deep

mighty waves rise high, crashing down, thunderous sound! as the lifeboat sinks

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Donna Jones

Date: 2/22/2016 9:03:00 PM

Love the suspense these few lines capture...very nice

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/17/2016 9:46:00 PM

A terrifying moment, but so well told about with powerful images... Nicely done, Joseph! Good luck in the contest!

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/15/2016 8:57:00 PM

Awesome visual within the lines... maybe the judge is not strict... is it OK now for a haiku to contain punctuation? Just a thought...Best wishes, Joseph!

Paul Callus

Date: 2/14/2016 12:46:00 PM

You catch the spirit of this picture well, Joseph; gl in the contest. ~ Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/12/2016 2:53:00 PM

striking 'ku, joseph... your 'aha' moment is a punch!..huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/12/2016 11:43:00 AM

exactly what the picture makes us see, Joseph! Good luck in the contest. I found it so difficult to do a good haiku for that picture.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/12/2016 7:33:00 AM

Deep dark and a sad ending to your haiku:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx