The Death Row Sentiments of a Mother

(Dictated in the final moments to her son)
(She speaks to her executionists in between her sentiments)  

I smashed my bare knuckles upon your painted truths
“No, no visitors.” 
Understanding the recklessness of your youth

I went to prison just so you wouldn’t go
“No, no H2O.”
You couldn’t take it, didn’t I tell you so?

At fourteen, you killed three, then gave me the gun
“No, no club soda.”
I put my fingers over yours, everyone   

Knowing your sugar coatings would crack apart
“No, no clergymen.”
I covered all your explanations with my heart 

I found rivers that held your tears of regret
“No, no family.” 
Flowing like loans from someone like me, in debt  

Many times I caught you before you hit ground
“No, no Mickey D’s.”
Supported you; every time you turned around

Whether right or wrong, I swore I’d pay the price
“No, no magazine.”   
I defended you, I was your sacrifice 

I saved you from a curse, of living peril
“No, no Psalms prayer.”
Dodging bullets from drive by gangs in feral

Hearts always have ability to forgive
“No, no cell phone calls.”
Whatever torture you chose, was mine to live

I forgive you, for not visiting, I swear
“No, I am guilty.”
Love your Mother, the final time, from “the Chair.”



Fiction
~~~~Submitted for the contest... "Love and Forgiveness” sponsored by Jim Fish~~~~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mason Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 8:08 AM
This is just brillant, Sandra. Don't think I've seen another like it here at the Soup ... haven't checked to see how you did in the contest but this is definitely a winner !!
Goodwin Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 6:24 PM
Omg this poem is breath takeing
Fraser Avatar
June 14, 2009 at 5:31 AM
Terrific write for the contest, good luck Sandra>>James
Faulkner Avatar
June 12, 2009 at 8:11 AM
best wishes in the contest. theres no doubt this piece will do well. -love and peace:james
Guzzi Avatar
June 11, 2009 at 2:03 PM
All clear! ;) keep up the great thought provoking writes! Light & Love
Winter Avatar
June 10, 2009 at 6:13 PM
Aww, sending some hugs your way. Chicken soup, snuggle under the covers, watch a good movie, float away to la la land. (Hoping it is not the nasty bug I had - bleck). Feel better sweet friend. Love your way, Shar xoxo
Guzzi Avatar
June 10, 2009 at 4:06 PM
powerful concept very powerful...who is speaking? writing is confusing...who is the murderer ...mother or son? Let me know soup mail me. Light & Love
Winter Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 9:41 AM
Wow. Powerful story and emotion here. Exceptional write. Good luck, that I don't believe you'll be needing. Love, Shar
Devonshire Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 9:30 AM
A very profound, excellent write, Sandra! You certainly paint a vivid picture of this woman with your words. Love, carolyn
Adeite Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 7:18 AM
Hmm, passionate and emotional, absolutely amazing. the whole essence of man's imperfection is love and... forgiveness. i love this piece and the message. great you!
Higgins Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 5:50 AM
This is powerful Sandra...from the opening to the end you delivered the emotions very well..the poem speaks with power and force and makes me hold on to every word....the last three lines are very sad..good writing and best of wishes.
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