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The Death of the Shallow Hobbit

Small and grotesque was the young man, Small by nature and small in heart., Love sought not to grace his soul/ Betwixt/ Without emotion he wasn't whole ? He lacked sensitivity and a heart., For never he spared time for the good/ Spitting on life's values like black death ! Wished Hell on others and gave one last breathe / Take me with you and be my saviour ! Hellish like eyes wishing dirty deals/ Slimmy hands planting evil seeds of death., Depth was his mind into rok and hole/ Letting Satan come in his body ! Before he knew him very well/ The hobbit went home to the doorstep of Hell ! Home at last at the Devil's house, Proclaiming his love for sin and bad ! He valued to serve Satan and his fatal goons ! The hobbit will be back again sometime soon., His acts of sin aren't yet finished ? This is in order to seal your doom !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/4/2011 5:27:00 AM
Good Morning Mario I am sorry but you entered this in my contest by mistake. My contest is about A Horse Story. Would you be so kind to remove it and put it in the correct contest. I wish you the best in the contest you are entering. Thank you. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2010 4:23:00 PM
interesting write it is rhyme. Light 7 Love
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