The Death of Nature - Hiku

 
the earth is fading away dying will recycling help the vast forests are shrinking fading animals extinct the oceans are polluted with trash the fish eating it the north glaciers are melting falling climate warming fear ________________________ November 24, 2021 Poetry/Haiku/Hiku/the death of nature - hiku Copyright Protected, ID 11-1409-370-24 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Hiku (Disciplined Brevity) sponsor, William Kekuala, Judged 12/1/21 Tenth Place
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Date: 12/3/2021 8:05:00 AM
A great haiku on the death of nature. Congratulations! By the way, I have been missing your contest owing ill health. Hope, I will be able to participate soon.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/3/2021 9:23:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations. I was wondering where you were, get better soon, friend ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 12/2/2021 9:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Constance! thank you for writing about the Earth's coming demise if we don't stop polluting.
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Date: 12/2/2021 10:08:00 AM
Ann, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment, we may be too late ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 12/2/2021 5:27:00 AM
The signs are there, so are the warnings....but pleas often fall on deaf ears. Unfortunately, many of those who are in a position to help most are tied to other agendas. ~ Congratulations on your merited win, Constance. Regards // paul
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Date: 12/2/2021 8:57:00 AM
Paul, thank you so much for the great comment and congratulations~ peace and tranquility Constance
Date: 12/1/2021 8:22:00 PM
Dear Constance, your potent pen spills the sad truth. A relevant and expressive piece. Congratulations for your excellent win in William’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/2/2021 8:57:00 AM
Susan, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, wishes~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 12/1/2021 7:47:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... wisdom-filled that warns. God bless you.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/2/2021 8:58:00 AM
Beata, thanks for the congrats and compliment, God bless ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 12/1/2021 3:36:00 PM
oh I just saw this on FB too. BIG congrats to you, Dear Heart. You did a wonderful job.
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Date: 12/2/2021 8:59:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment and congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 12/1/2021 12:50:00 PM
We chose a similar theme Constance, many congratulations on your win, hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/1/2021 2:34:00 PM
Jan, thanks so much for the congrats, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 12/1/2021 11:03:00 AM
Nicely done, Constance. Tho' Petula's upbeat filled hearts, now there's a foreboding that crowd minds of A Sign of the Times e'er creeping on us. My compliments on your placement in the Hiku contest, Aloha!
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Date: 12/1/2021 2:35:00 PM
William, thanks for the inspiration and the contest and my placement, and the comment and compliment~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 11/29/2021 3:30:00 PM
Great topic and thoughtful messages, Dear Heart.
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Date: 11/30/2021 9:28:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for the visit and comment, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 11/25/2021 6:26:00 AM
it would seem....a distant dream....sleeping with the dinosaurs...
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Date: 11/25/2021 9:22:00 AM
John, thanks for visiting, perhaps not in my lifetime but it seems that it is possible that humanity will have the same fate as the dinosaurs ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 11/25/2021 5:11:00 AM
Each haiku an image of decay and destruction of earth. Together your linked poems--an urgent call for action. Succinctly and effectively delivered, Constance.
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Date: 11/25/2021 9:23:00 AM
Vijay, thank you for the great comment and compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 11/25/2021 1:59:00 AM
So true Constance...The earth is fading...little by little ...Global warming causes imbalance in our ecosystem...causing so much of disasters such hurricanes, floods...so well penned...Hugs...~ Ani
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Date: 11/25/2021 9:25:00 AM
Ani, thanks for the comment, I agree, the climate change is causing disasters all over the world and in my country of Canada, hugs ~ love and serenity _Constance
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