The Death of Grandfather Clock

I am quite annoyed by the ticking, or perhaps it's called 'tocking,' by the ever-present clicking in a language known as 'clocking.' Must Grandfather Time command my life? He so rudely continues without a thought that his hammering rhythm of strife mocks the pulse of my human heart. What a wild fantasy my life would be to exist without his relentless beat. If time could but stand still for me, the silence would be so sweet. In solace of night I close my eyes and seek escape from earthly chore. I cannot find a tranquil paradise for his gong peals out once more. Each quarter hour he calls to me as if singing a monotonous song. But his tune is never a rhapsody. Incessant verses are much too long. I am eager to stop his wagging tongue and shackle the swing of his pendulum. Each hour would then go by unsung. At last he'd know his time had come.

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Date: 9/3/2023 2:10:00 PM
This is so great Lin!!! Thanks
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Date: 2/23/2016 6:18:00 AM
I was always told,"Brilliant minds think a like" I'm not sure how brilliant I am But I am pretty sure how smart you are. Saying almost the same things.
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Date: 10/10/2015 3:01:00 PM
LIN, A WELL CRAFTED AND ENJOYABLE POEM. I too see hidden meaning in its appeal of Time and that VERY great human fault--death. ALTHOUGH WE MAY PRAY FOR ETERNITY , WE WEAK SHELLS ARE ILL SUITED FOR IT AS WE EXIST NOW. A7
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Date: 10/10/2015 6:05:00 PM
Hello, Robert. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem since there are so many. TIME plays an important role in our lives. I pray to live in an eternity, but not as we know it now. We are weak shells, imperfect humans, lucky to have a God who shows us mercy. Thanks again for your comments. ~ Lin ~
Date: 10/8/2015 6:57:00 AM
Hi Lin. This is a very well written poem that was a joy to read. There are hidden meanings in this one and I'm sure I will have to read it a few times in order to find them. Therefore it will go into my favorites. Thanks for sharing... Robert.
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Date: 10/8/2015 7:51:00 AM
Good morning Robert. Thank you for reading and especially for adding it to your favorites. I'll be curious to see what hidden meanings you discover, and if you like, I'll let you in on how it came to be written...Lin
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