The Deaf and Passionless Leaves

I remember it so clearly,
The first time I saw you.
You said you loved my aviators.

Our meeting was so ordinary,
And having nothing witty to say
I just asked your name  
Standing in that long driveway.

Who would have thought
Two years later
I would be whispering your name
To the deaf and passionless leaves
Just trying to ease the pressure
On my shackled, poem-filled, heart.

Focusing each minute you're near
On the propinquity of the irresistible.
Everything about you draws me,
And I am always pushing back
Against that ever present urge 
To fall in love with you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Breidenthal Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 1:11 AM
How can I not be drawn by such a title?This kind of writing excites me... it is filled with such incredible emotion...I faved it right away. "Everything about you draws me, And I am always pushing back Against the urge to fall in love with you." Heaven knows I know the feeling... you express things very thoughtfully! Great great poetry!Just as she draws you, your words have drawn me..I'm so impressed Always, Laura
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March 26, 2015 at 11:18 AM
Wow thanks =) I appreciate you taking the time to read so many of my poems, and i am glad you liked them. it's nice to have people read my words for once after such a long time of them sitting in journals
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