The Dead Pour Me Out Like Green Tea

I am dead to many, a few are dead to me.
I am forgotten 
by young women in green silk sarongs.

Some of the dead have taken vows of silence
lips forever sealed with amnesia.

I have fished Koi ponds for the sun,
drunk the passions of dreaming girls
as if they were my own.

Now I am an old man,
I sip the jasmine
as if it were a blood memory,
yet mind shakes
with a more than timid palsy.

Ring the temple bell once more for me,
I loved them all
and you can keep your pallid pity.

The dead pour me out like green tea
and if I were just a ghost,
just a thought once placed
upon a damp bamboo mat,
I will take that.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 10/5/2022 4:43:00 AM
Especially loved fishing koi ponds for the sun and girls in green silk sarongs.I have and will continue to see you in my minds eye as a fresh faced young man Eric as you come across in your spirit.
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Date: 10/4/2022 9:50:00 PM
I love the oriental theme throughout this mesmerizing poem ~ a FAVE for me.
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